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Creating a manga based on opinions from the Internet...
ネットで意見してもらって 作品を作るなんて
作品は邪道でもいいけど 作り方が邪道じゃ駄目だ
It's fine to create something unorthodox,
but an unorthodox method of doing it isn't!
How disappointing.
残念だな 亜城木先生なら賛同してくれると思っていたのに
I was fairly certain you two would approve of my methods.
面白い作品を作るためなら 手段を選ばない
I thought you were the types who'd use any means necessary to produce something good.
I thought you were more innovative than every other manga artist.
他のマンガ家より革新的な考えを持った作家
そう思ってました
We're the ones who are disappointed.
残念なのは 僕たちの方だ
亜城木夢叶のファンだという才能ある人が こんなやり方してたなんて
To think that a talented fan of ours would resort to such methods...
プライドが なさすぎる
Where's your sense of pride?
プライドって 何ですか
"Pride"? What's that supposed to be?
どんな手を使ってでも人気を取る
Become popular by using any means necessary.
それがプロですよね
That's what being a pro's all about, isn't it?
それを邪魔するプライドがあるというのなら
If you let your pride get in the way of that,
that just means that you guys aren't quite pros yet.
それは まだプロになりきれていないという事です
マンガは 担当編集と作るなんて
Isn't the whole idea of us writing manga under an editor's supervision
出版社側が 勝手に作ったルールじゃないですか
just some rule that the publishers made up?
編集に頼っているうちは自分に自信のないアマチュアですよ
Relying on an editor means that you're an amateur with no confidence in yourself.
プロを なめない方がいい
Don't underestimate real pros.
やりたければ やってみればいい
Go ahead and do it your way if that's what you think.
自分の信じる やり方で
でも いつか 必ずボロが出る
But mark my words: You'll get exposed sooner or later!
ano ne moshimo ima sugu ni kimi no moto he to
Hey, if I could go to where you are right now
ikeru naraba kono koe ga nakunattemo ii ya
then I could accept losing my voice
mezasu basho ga amari ni mo tooku
The goals I've set myself seem impossible to reach,
boku wa mou michi ni mayoisou da
and I feel lost on my path
kowareta jishaku wo ate ni shiteru n da
I'm relying on a broken compass and hiding in another's shadow
dareka no kage ni kakurete sa
nanika wo te ni ireru tame nanika wo tebanasu nante koto wo
If we keep letting go of some things in order to find something else,
tsuzukete mo kitto bokura wa otona ni wa narenai
then I'm convinced we can never grow up
tsuzukete mo kitto bokura wa otona ni wa narenai
narenai
Never
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Confidence and Resolve
50人
50 people?!
そんなに たくさんの人に ネットで意見もらってたの
He gathered opinions from that many people over the Internet?
七峰さんって
Nanamine is...
Don't go around telling anybody, now.
誰にも言うなよ
だ 誰にもって
A-Anybody?
Oh! You mean Hattori and your assistants!
アシさんとか服部さんね
その他 誰にもだって
I mean anybody!
Okay...
はい
ファンだから 俺たちには教えてくれたって感じだけど
He probably told us because he's a fan of ours, but it was still pretty naive of him.
甘いよな
俺なら 絶対 誰にも言わないし聞きたくもなかった
If it were me, I would never tell anyone. I didn't even want to hear him talk about it.
ばれたら また問題になるだろうな
It'll be another big mess if he ever gets caught.
でも その作り方 面白いの できそうだよね
It seems like you'd definitely come up with something interesting by doing that, though.
面白くなる ならない以前の問題だろ
This isn't about how effective it is! There's more to it than that!
サイコーも言ったが そんなのプロじゃない
Just like Saikou said, it's not something a pro would do.
まあ 読切が載りそうって言ってたから
That said, since his one-shot's going to be published anyway, I still kinda want to read it.
それを早く見てみたいけどな
「PCP」の上 いかれたくないな
I don't want it to do better than PCP.
アイデアをもらってるにしろ 七峰君には才能がある
He may be filching ideas from others, but Nanamine's still as talented as they come.
読切なら センターカラーだろうし ページ数もあるからな
A one-shot will get lots of pages and a color spread in the middle of the issue.
「シンジツの教室」レベルなら
If it's just as good as Classroom of Truth, it'll definitely do better than PCP.
「PCP」の上 いくよ
You're right.
だな
素直に認めちゃうんだ
You were pretty blunt about that.
冷静な分析
It's just a rational analysis.
それより もし七峰君が連載するような事になった時に 負けない事
It's more important not to let him overtake us if he does get serialized.
Yeah.
でも あのやり方じゃ うまくいっても 最初だけだと俺は思う
However, I have a feeling he'll only do well at the beginning if he sticks to his method.
なら いいんだけど
I sure hope so.
Our world's all about taking risks, though.
「やってみなければ分からない」が この世界
七峰君なら 七峰君たちなら
If Nanamine... if he and his friends manage to haul in a lot of votes for his one-shot,
読切で票取ったら きっと すぐ連載ネーム回せる
they'll be allowed to submit a serialization storyboard soon after.
He'll submit it to the committee that'll gather right after his one-shot gets published.
読切後すぐの連載会議に出すだろうな
In that case, all you have to do is to come up with a new series and a good serialization storyboard to go up against him!
じゃあさ そこに もう1作って考えてる面白い連載ネームをぶつけて勝負
A little while ago, we would have gotten all fired up and done just that.
少し前の俺たちなら 熱くなってそう考えたかもしれないけど
But I don't think there's any point in taking up his challenge right now.
別に七峰君に合わせる必要も意味もない
焦らず やるなら 確実なもの
We'll take our time. If we come up with something, it has to be good.
ほんと冷静
You're really calm about this.
You're going for an unorthodox battle manga, right?
邪道バトルだっけ
まだ全然 出来てないの
You haven't thought of anything yet, have you?
Nope. I'm planning to go for something even better than that.
いや 邪道バトルの その上を行く
サイコーが提案してくれた
I'll go with Saikou's idea...
An unorthodox standard battle manga!
邪道な王道バトルだ
Huh?! What's that supposed to be?!
何それ
邪道バトルと どう違うの
How's that any different from an unorthodox battle manga?
And isn't this getting more complicated by the second?
てか どんどんややこしくなってない
なってる
It is!
Hey, Miura!
おい 港浦
Any idea where Kosugi is?
小杉 知らないか
下で 七峰君と打ち合わせしてますけど
He's meeting with Nanamine downstairs.
そうか
I see.
まあ 無理か
Well, I guess that's out the window, then.
どうしたんですか
What's wrong?
8月10日売りの合併号の読切枠
We have an empty slot for a one-shot in the August 10th compilation issue, and I can't find anything good to put in it.
まだ いい作品がなくて
七峰君が この前持ってきたやつで できないかって話に
I wanted to ask him if we could use the one that Nanamine brought in before.
That's not gonna happen. We have to deliver that issue to the press within the month.
無理でしょう それだと入稿 今月中じゃないですか
だよなぁ
Yeah. I figured as much, but I thought I'd ask anyway.
と思いつつも 一応 聞いてみよ～っと
Nanamine's Nervousness and the Farts that Come with It?
七峰君の「緊張とそれに伴う気体」をですか
話は してみますが 今からじゃ 無理ではないかと
I'll ask him, but it's probably impossible at this point.
So it'll make it in if I can finish it by July?
じゃあ 7月中にUPできれば載せてもらえるんですか
I'll do it! Please let me do it!
やります やらせて下さい
B-But you have to make revisions to the storyboard—
で でも ネームの直しもあるし
It's okay! I can make them in time!
大丈夫です 間に合わせてみせます
I have a ton of friends who can help me with the manuscript!
僕 原稿を手伝ってくれる友達 いっぱい いますから
I can do 45 pages in two weeks!
45ページなら2週間あれば できます
With friends? In two weeks?
友達と 2週間
はい
Yes!
じゃあ とにかく 今 言った直しができてから 考えるという事で
Well, for now, let's revisit the idea after you finish the revisions we discussed today.
一日で直してきます
I'll do them within a day!
50人中34人
34 out of the 50 are here... They sure are bored today.
みんな暇なんだな
言われたのは「キャラを立てる 絵のデフォルメ 下品な表現を変える」
I was told to make the characters stand out, stylize the art,
and change some of the vulgar language.
Make the character stand out again?
It's not that kind of a manga!
Doesn't he understand realistic drawing is better?
Your editor is a moron
It's not that kind of a manga!
realistic drawing is better
Doesn't he understand realistic drawing is better?
ぼ 僕が言った直しと全然 違うじゃないか
Th-These are completely different from the revisions I told you to make!
But it's better now, right?
でも 面白くなってますよね
よく読んで 冷静に判断して下さい
Read it carefully and consider it objectively.
判断しかねるなら 上の人に見てもらって下さい
If you can't do that, then show it to the higher-ups.
僕は これで通ると思います
In my opinion, this will make the cut.
もし通らなければ その合併号での掲載は諦めます
If it doesn't, then I'll give up on my one-shot getting published in that compilation issue.
Fine. I'll take a look.
分かった
これで 見てもらおう
ありがとうございます
Thank you!
小杉さんなら 分かってくれると思ってました
I knew you would understand!
I'm very lucky to have such a capable editor.
有能な担当さんが付いてくれて 本当に僕は幸せ者です
So this is how he changed it.
こう直してきたか
めちゃくちゃ面白いじゃんか
This is brilliant!
すごいっすね
It's amazing.
一見ギャグにしか思えない設定だが
On first look, it seems just like a normal gag manga,
キャラの心理を深くリアルに描写する事で
but by realistically fleshing out the character's mentalities,
真剣なストーリーとして読まされてしまいますね
it strikes the reader as a serious story.
小杉 ラッキーだな
You're so lucky, Kosugi!
1年目で いや まだ2か月で こんな読切 掲載できるなんて
You're only in your first year... actually, only your first two months, and you're already publishing a one-shot this good!
でも なんか 自分で作ってる気しないんですよね
I don't really feel like I had a hand it making it, though.
Well, everything's gone so well for you since being assigned here, so I guess it's natural to feel that way.
まあ 配属されたばかりでこんなトントン拍子に事が運んだら
そう思って当たり前だよ
よし これでいくぞ
Okay, let's go with this!
これなら上もOKを出す
The higher-ups will approve of this too.
本当に今から描いて間に合うんだろうな
Will he really make it if he starts drawing this now, though?
はい 本人は2週間あれば 描けると
Well, he did say that he could finish it within two weeks.
2週間 マジかよ 天才だな
Two weeks?!
Seriously?!
The kid's a wiz!
でも 個人的には この作品 あまり好きになれないんですよね
But personally, I can't bring myself to like this manga.
何でだよ 面白いって
Why not? It's good!
Yes, it certainly is.
確かに面白い
18歳の作った作品とは思えないほどに
It's actually so good that I'm having trouble believing that an 18 year old kid wrote that.
巧みさはあるが 若気がないというか
It's cleverly written, but it lacks a certain youthfulness.
そう 新人らしくないんです
Exactly! It doesn't seem like something a newbie would come up with!
票 取った時のために もう連載用の形も 大体出来てるって言ってました
He told me that he's already almost finished with a version for serialization just in case he got enough votes.
すげ～な
That's amazing!
Geez, Kosugi! It's only your first year here, and yet you're already looking at getting a serialization in August!
っていうか 小杉 配属1年目の8月に
Hiramaru and Aoki are both aiming for the August serialization committee.
平丸君 蒼樹先生も8月の連載会議 狙ってるんだ
From what I'm hearing over there, it sounds like Nanamine's in the running as well.
あの勢いだと 七峰君も そこに入ってくる
まずいですね 蒼樹さんともっと打ち合わせをしなくては
This is bad.
I'll need to have more meetings with Aoki.
Same here. I need to have a strategy meeting with Hiramaru as well.
こっちも平丸君と作戦会議だ
Who thought his art would be a rush job? Heck, it's even more refined now than it was in Classroom of Truth!
絵が荒れるどころか「シンジツの教室」より丁寧じゃないか
This is amazing!
す すごいですね
I can't believe that a newbie could do this much in only two weeks!
新人が2週間で ここまで描けるなんて
Some of his friends helped him on it, apparently.
手伝ってくれる仲間がいるみたいなんです
Friends?
仲間
にしても これを2週間で仕上げるには かなりのレベルを持った相当の人数が
He must have some pretty talented friends to be able to finish this in just two weeks.
I'm Katou Natsumi. It's nice to meet you.
加藤奈津実です よろしくお願いします
I'm Orihara Ichiriki.
折原一力です よろしく
Nice to meet ya!
森屋です よろしくお願いします
I'm Moriya. It's a pleasure.
また加藤さんと一緒で心強いです
It's reassuring to know that you're working with us again, Katou.
いえ そんな
Oh, please don't say that.
加藤さんが 来てくれるって聞いて うれしかったです
I was happy when I heard you'd be coming.
Why the sudden application here, though?
でも 何で急に
私 白鳥先生のアシに何度か応募してたんですけど
Well, I applied to be Shiratori's assistant several times at first...
Huh?
Oh, nothing!
いえ 何でも またお願いします
I'm glad to work together with you again!
Same here.
こちらこそ
I deposited the money.
お金は 振り込んでおきましたよ
I'm counting on you.
また よろしくお願いします
Should we go to Kazu's house?
カズんち 行っていい
うん いいよ
Yeah, okay.
ゲーム やりたい
I wanna play video games.
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Buying intelligence with money?
金で脳を買う 人間は金と知恵でランク付けされる
People are ranked according to their intelligence and wealth?
What the heck is this manga?
何だ このマンガ
こんなの「ジャック」でやろうとしてるのか
Jack's actually publishing something like this?
And what's more, a 15 year old kid made it!
しかも 15歳がこれを
Awesome!
すげ
パパ 頼みがあるんだけど
Dad, can I ask you for a favor?
What?
何だ
お金が欲しいんだ
I want some money.
いくら欲しいんだ
How much?
で できるだけ たくさん
A-As much as possible.
金をばらまくと
Once you shower them with money,
みんなは愛想良くして近づいてくる
people will start to be nicer to you.
友達なんて金で買える
I can buy friends with money.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
「この世は金と知恵」そのとおり
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
They were right. This world does revolve around money and intelligence.
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In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
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In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
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In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
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In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
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In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
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In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
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In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
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In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
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In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
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In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
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In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
In this world, everything gets ranked. If you have money and knowledge, you can even become a god here.
You can buy as many friends as you want with money
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You can buy as many friends as you want with money
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真実だ
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It's the truth.
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亜城木夢叶 最高だ
Ashirogi Mutou is the best.
やりたければ やってみればいい
Go ahead and do it your way.
でも いつか 必ずボロが出る
But mark my words: You'll get exposed sooner or later!
So, there you have it. This newcomer, Nanamine, is a threat. It's likely that he'll submit
そういう事で その脅威の新人 七峰君も 多分同じ連載会議にネームを出してくる
a storyboard to the same committee that you're aiming for.
しかも 主人公のキャラが恋愛に臆病というのが見事にかぶっている
And what's more, his work overlaps with yours because his protagonist is also afraid of falling in love.
Oh no! That's no good!
そんな 困ります
I already told Yuri: "I'm definitely going to get serialized! Hahaha!"
ユリタンに「必ず連載してみせますよ ハッハッハ」と言ってしまったんですから
Yuri?
ユリタン
Yes. I call her Yuri now, and she calls me Hiramaru.
はい
「ユリタン」「平丸さん」と呼び合う仲です
Hiramaru, please answer your trusty love adviser, Yoshida Kouji, honestly.
平丸君 この恋のアドバイザー吉田幸司を信用して正直に答えてみろ
How far have you gotten in your relationship since confessing?
その後 どこまで進展した
How far?
どこまでって あのあと一度 外で お茶しましたが
We've gone out for tea once.
そ そうか お茶だけか
I-I see!
Just tea?
Wh-Why do you look so happy?
な 何で うれしそうなんですか
This doesn't look good, Hiramaru!
まずいぞ 平丸君
これは非常にまずい状況だぞ
You're in a tight spot right now.
考えてみれば 告白した時 蒼樹先生は
If you think about, all Aoki said when you confessed to her was:
今日とても楽しかったです また会って下さい
"Today was fun. Let's do this again."
と言っただけ そして
And also, even though you affectionately call her "Yuri", she only calls you "Hiramaru."
「ユリタン」と呼んでも 「平丸さん」
つまり 蒼樹先生は「平丸さん」をあくまで お茶友達としてしか考えてない
That can only mean that she thinks of you as a tea buddy, and nothing more.
Th-That can't be!
そ そんな
もし連載を取らなければ
If you don't get a serialization soon, even that weak connection you have with her might disappear.
そんな つきあいさえ 危うい
まさか 何で
No way! But why?!
はっきりと 仕事しない人は嫌だと言っていた
Because she clearly stated that she disliked people who didn't work.
That's just how women are.
女とは そういう生き物
いっ 嫌だ そんなのは嫌だ
No! I don't want that! I don't!
あ あれ 吉田氏 なぜか急に ネガティブなアイデアが湯水のように
Huh?
Mr. Yoshida, my thoughts are suddenly brimming with negative ideas right now.
しばらくは このパターンでいける
All right, I'm going with this for now!
すげ～よ 予想はしていたけど
Wow.
The author of "Classroom of Truth"
"Lots of Happiness" in the entertainment
Just as I predicted, it's all over the Internet again.
Debuting in Jack!
またネットの トップニュースになってる
Debuting in Jack!
Talk about some really effective publicity.
すごい宣伝効果よね
でも これ 自分でハードル上げてるって事にもなるよな
He only raised the bar higher for himself, though.
Yeah. Nanamine seems like he's confident,
七峰君は自信あるみたいだけど
自分でネタをまき 世間に注目させ
but he blew his own horn and got the whole world's attention, so now he has to surpass their inflated expectations.
その期待以上のものを見せつける
彼の言う ネットの50人で 作り上げれば不可能じゃない
However, it's possible if he really does create it with 50 other people like he said he would.
いや 初投稿から半年以内に連載だって 可能かもしれない
And not only that. It may even be possible for him to get serialized within six months of his first Jack submission.
Hot newcomer's debut!
One-shot with colored centerfold
One shot with colored centerfold
"Nervousness and the Farts
that Come with It"
Nanamine Tooru
やっぱり面白いな
It's good, just like we thought it'd be.
あたしなんか ラストで感動しちゃったわよ
That last part really got me.
ネットの反応は「シンジツの教室」の方が面白い が大半
A majority of the opinions on the 'net say that Classroom of Truth was better.
「ジャック」だから これくらいの方がいいって意見も少なくないけど
Many of them accepted the fact that he had to tone it down for Jack, though.
ネットは あくまで ネット
People will say what they want on the Internet.
「ジャック」で人気が取れるかどうか
What matters to us is how popular it'll be in Jack.
Yeah.
話の起承転結も心理描写もよくできているし
The story development and portrayal of the character's thoughts are well done,
絵も相変わらず うまい
and the art is still good.
It'll likely be popular.
取るかもな
七峰君の作品は ワンアイデアだけど 面白いよな
Nanamine's work revolves around the "one-idea" concept, but it's still good.
ワンアイデア
"One-idea"?
うそをつくと消される 緊張するとオナラが出る
If you lie, you disappear.
If you're nervous, you fart.
シンプルな設定で 話を膨らませる作り
He builds and expands the story around a single, simple idea,
そのアイデアが秀逸
which has to be brilliant.
なるほど
I see.
However, his characters aren't that well-developed.
でも 七峰君の作品はキャラが弱いんだよな
俺も そうだけど
That's true for me too, though.
なあ サイコー
Hey, Saikou.
邪道な王道バトルなんだけど
Regarding our unorthodox standard battle manga...
Can we build its story around the characters first?
まず キャラから作ってくんない
Huh?
サイコーが かっこいいと思うキャラ
A character you think is cool.
そのキャラで見せたいかっこいいシーン ポーズ
A cool scene or pose to show off that character.
It doesn't even have to be human!
人間でも人間じゃなくてもいい
王道バトルっぽいキャラ
Any standard battle manga character!
その王道キャラで 邪道な話を作る
We'll then build an unorthodox story around that standard character!
これこそ邪道な王道バトル
That's an unorthodox standard battle manga!
Creating the characters first...
キャラを先に作る
I see. That's one way of doing it.
なるほど そういうやり方もあるな
Coming up with an unorthodox story's gonna be tough,
その邪道な話は 少し悔しいが
but I've picked up a few things from Nanamine's work,
七峰作品を見習って ワンアイデア設定ができれば一番いいと思う
and I've decided that a one-idea story would be best.
サイコーが作ったキャラを見て
I'll look at the characters you make,
インスパイアされた話を 俺が作る
and I'll create a story inspired from them.
How about it?
どう
キャラから話か うん 悪くない
Writing a story based on the characters, huh?
It sounds good!
時間ある時は それやってみるよ
Once we have time, let's do it!
And of course, let's do something that can be made into an anime!
もちろん アニメ化狙える作品な
おう
Yeah!
It still sounds pretty vague, but nice work!
相変わらず理屈っぽいけど いい感じ
Judging from your face, Nanamine's one-shot is doing well in the rankings, right?
その顔は七峰君の読切 速報 良かったな
はい 1位です
Yeah. It's in first place.
It was a great idea to take a normally funny concept and flip it around, making it completely serious.
普通 コメディーっぽくやりたくなるのを
あくまでも真剣にやったのがよかったんだろうな
It's a story made for a one-shot, though.
しかし 読切タイプですよね
Oh, right.
あっ そうか
But he's already finished the first chapter of its serialization storyboard.
それがもう 連載ネームの1話目も出来てる
読んでみるか
Want to read it?
「有意義な学園生活に必要なそれ」
"A Necessity for a Meaningful College Lifestyle."
変えてきたんですね タイトル
He changed the title, right?
なるほど
I see.
読切から連載への持っていき方もうまい
The transition from a one-shot to a serialization is well done.
How can he turn out one thing after another so quickly?
何で こんなに早く 次々 出来るんですかね
天才すぎますよ
He's an incredible genius.
10年に一度の逸材だな
A talent you see only once every ten years.
そうですかね
You think so?
おいおい 担当のお前がそういうつもりで育てないと駄目だって事だよ
Come on now, you're the one who has to steer him in that direction.
Uh, right.
はい
「PCP」ともだいぶ かぶってくるな
It overlaps with PCP quite a bit.
それにしても何だ この違和感
And what's with this bad vibe I'm getting?
七峰君 本ちゃんも1位だ
Nanamine, you placed first in the final rankings.
All right!
やった
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It's all thanks to you, Kosugi.
小杉さんのおかげです
Can I drop by the editorial department right now?
今から 編集部に行ってもいいでしょうか
Right now?
今から
I have Chapters 2 and 3 of my serialization storyboard done already.
連載用ネーム 2話目も3話目も出来てるんです
What?! Already?!
もう
Don't be so surprised! You're the one who told me that the committee meets in two weeks.
「もう」って
連載会議は2週間後って言ってたじゃないですか
I tried really hard to make it in time for that.
間に合わせようと頑張ったんです
I even added in some new ideas for Chapter 1 to make it better too!
アイデアを足し 1話目もより面白く改良しました
But I already told him that Chapter 1 was fine as it was...
1話目は あれでいいと言ったのに
Even so, I'm surprised how quickly you churn your work out.
それにしても よくそんなに早くできるね
How do you do it?
どうやってるんだ
It's a trade secret!
それは 企業秘密ですよ
企業秘密
A trade secret?
分かった
I understand. Mind if I drop by your place?
僕が そっちへ行ってもいいか
ここに
Here?
本当に連載するようになれば そっちで打ち合わせする事になる
If you do get serialized,
our meetings will be held at your house,
だから1回 行っておきたいんだ
so I'd like to have at least one meeting there before that.
はい お願いします
Sure, I'll be glad to have you over!
今日 金曜日で バイトもありませんし
I don't have to work on Fridays, so it's fine.
It should take me 30 minutes by car to get there.
車なら 30分で行けると思う
My editor is coming here now.
分かりました お願いします
My editor is coming here now.
Gotcha. I'm looking forward to it!
My editor is coming here now.
Oh!
The shitty editor is coming?
Let's all nurture Kosugi.
Don't tease the newbie editor
どうですか
How are they?
直した1話目と2話目 3話目
My revised Chapters 1-3.
I'm still not satisfied with the protagonist.
やっぱり主人公がパッとしないっていうか
In these kinds of stories, I think it's better if the protagonist is normal so that the readers can identify with him.
こういう話の場合 主人公は普通の方が 読者は感情移入できると思うんです
それと僕は1話目OK出したよね
Also, I already approved of your initial first chapter.
OKが出て 2話目3話目を作るのは分かる
I know that you needed to make changes to Chapters 2 and 3,
but why did you make even further changes to Chapter 1?
なぜ1話目も直したんだ
Even if you were satisfied with it,
小杉さんが あれで満足しても
everyone else wasn't.
みんなは まだ満足してないからですよ
Everyone else?
みんな
Well, whatever.
もういいや
隠していても しかたない
There's no point in hiding it anymore.
それより 小杉さんにも参加してもらう方がいい
It'd actually be better if you were in on this too.
Good morning, Mr. Editor!
What's this?
Good morning, Mr. Editor!
これは
Good morning, Mr. Editor!
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みんなです
They're "everyone else."
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アイデアを出してくれる人が 50人
I have 50 people giving me ideas.
いつでも半分くらいの人はすぐ集まります
At any given time, half the people are around.
The editor is here and is looking at the monitor. Please consider your language carefully.
Good morning, Mr. Editor!
Good work!
I always read "Shonen Jack"
Glad to meet you! Glad to meet you! I'm a 28 year-old working at an office. Please remember me.
I think manga is all about the characters!
じゃあ 君の作品はオリジナルじゃなかったのか
So your manga wasn't an original work?!
何 言ってるんですか
What are you talking about?
他の作品からアイデアを取ってるんじゃないんだから
I'm not taking ideas from any other manga.
完全オリジナルですよ
It's completely original.
ただ 多くの人の意見を取り入れてるだけです
I'm just getting input from a lot of other people.
原稿を仕上げたのは
And what about finishing up your manuscripts?
ネットで見つけた絵のうまい人たちに アシスタントを頼んだんです
I asked some good artists I met online to be my assistants.
そうだったのか
So that's how you do it.
何か問題でも
Is there a problem?
You bet there is!
大ありだ
If this gets serialized and becomes a hit,
例えば 連載になって ヒットした時
「アイデア料を出せ」と言う人が出てきたら どうする
what will you do when those people who helped you come asking for money?
切って他の人を入れればいい
I'll kick them out and get others to help.
最初から そう言ってあります
That's what I told them all from the start.
ばらされたら どうする
What'll you do once you get exposed?
こういうやり方をしている事を
Once people find out you're doing this...
認めればいい
Then I'll freely acknowledge it.
画期的な作り方をしてますと
I'll say that I'm doing something revolutionary here.
普通に考えて 自分から公表する事ではないんですよね
But think about it—I won't announce it publicly,
編集部には 黙っておいて下さい
so it won't get out if the editorial department stays quiet, too.
僕じゃ力不足なのか
Am I not good enough for you?
That's right.
はい
Some of these people have previously been serialized or have had more than five years of editing experience.
事実 この中には 連載経験者も 編集5年以上やった人もいます
The editor is here and is looking at the monitor. Please consider your language carefully
Good morning, Mr. Editor!
Good work!
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Glad to meet you! Glad to meet you! I'm a 28 year-old working at an office. Please remember me.
I think manga is all about the characters!
Let's make "A Meaningful School Life" into a good manga
I'll advise you about anything
Let's make a good manga
I'm kk34, please remember me
Good work!
Nice to meet ya!
I'm a 30 year old virgin who loves Jack
Kosugi, can you honestly say that you're better than these 50 people?
小杉さん この50人より 自分の方が優秀だと言い切れますか
These second and third chapters we made on our own without consulting you.
2話目3話目は僕たちが勝手に作った話
If the serialization committee approves these, then I'd like you to follow our lead.
もし これで連載会議に通ったら
僕たちに従ってもらいたいんですよね
Follow your lead?
従う
言いなりになれというのではありません
I won't force you to do anything.
51人目として意見を出してくれればいい
You can submit your opinion as the 51st person in my group.
小杉さん
Kosugi, this is your first year as an editor, right?
まだ編集1年目ですよね
3年以内に結果出さないと 異動になりますよ
If you can't produce results within three years, you'll be transferred.
図星だったみたいですね
It looks like I was right!
小杉さん すぐ顔に出るから 分かりやすいよ
Kosugi, your thoughts are written all over your face.
ネットの書き込みって 結構 本当なんですね
The blogs around the 'net were pretty accurate.
結果 欲しいでしょう
You want good results, right?
ヒット作 出したいんでしょう
You want to produce a big hit, right?
このやり方なら 確実に ヒット作が出せるんです
Well, with this method, I can guarantee you one.
僕のやり方で できないなら 他の雑誌に行きます
If you won't let me do this, I'll go to another magazine.
「シンジツの教室」のおかげで 引っ張りだこなのは知ってますよね
You know that I'm a hot commodity right now because of Classroom of Truth, right?
有望な新人に他に行かれたら 困るでしょう
You'd be in some hot water if you let a rising star like me go to a competitor, right?
むしろ僕は 小杉さんに大きなチャンスを与えているんです
I'm offering you a huge chance here, you know.
決めて下さい やるのか やらないのか
Make your choice.
Are you in or not?
10年に一度の逸材だな
He's a talent you see only once every ten years.
担当のお前が そういうつもりで育てないと駄目って事だよ
You're the one who has to steer him in that direction.
分かった
Fine.
君のやり方で やってみよう
Let's do it your way.
さすが 小杉さん
Nice, Kosugi! I knew you'd come around!
小杉さんなら分かってくれると思ってました
僕は理解ある担当がついて幸せです
I'm glad I have such an understanding editor!
一緒に頑張りましょう
Let's work hard together!
新妻君以来の大型新人だって もちきりだ
They're saying he's the biggest newcomer since you appeared.
誰がですか
Who?
I told you already, it's Nanamine.
だから 七峰君だって
もしかして 読切まだ読んでないのか
Haven't you read his one-shot yet?
His art was good.
絵は うまい方でした
それだけ
Is that all you have to say?
面白くなかったのか 新妻君は
Don't you think it was good?
面白かったですね
It was.
第二の亜城木夢叶
He's the next Ashirogi Mutou.
亜城木夢叶2世現るって感じでした
It feels like Ashirogi Mutou version 2.0 has appeared.
I see.
そう 亜城木君か それ以上だろ
Like Ashirogi, or even better, right?
2世が元祖を超えたら面白いですけど
It'd be interesting if version 2.0 surpassed the original,
でも 亜城木先生と違って作者の顔が全然見えません
but unlike Ashirogi Mutou, I can't see the author's face!
Well, since I've never seen him, I guess that only makes sense.
まあ 見た事ないから当たり前ですけど
当たり前だな
Of course.
七峰君の作品 連載会議に回される事になったぞ
Nanamine's manga is being submitted to the serialization committee.
That was fast.
早いですね
平丸さんと蒼樹さんも回すんですよね
Along with Hiramaru's and Aoki's, right?
平丸君は ギャグと考えればかぶらないが
Hiramaru's is a gag manga, so there's no overlap there.
蒼樹君はきつくなるかもしれないな
It may prove to be tougher for Aoki's, though.
同じ学園ものだから
It has a similar school setting.
だが一番かぶるのは「PCP」だ
However, the manga it overlaps with most is PCP.
人の心情や駆け引きを追っていくところ 学園もの そして絵
It closely resembles the way it presents people's emotions and strategies,
as well as the school setting and the art.
七峰君には負けたくないな
I don't want to lose to him.
Yeah.
もし七峰 透が連載になったら
If Nanamine Tooru gets a serialization,
僕たちが責任持って「PCP」で潰そう
we'll take responsibility for it and crush him with PCP!
Yeah!
潰すって
Crush him?
いえ つい勢いで な
Oh, we just got carried away.
Right?
Uh, yeah.
Good morning!
おはようございます
七峰君連載会議の結果 ここで待つ気か
Nanamine! Are you here to wait for the committee's decision?
って事は 相当 自信あるんだな
That must mean that you're pretty confident in your chances, huh?
いやあ 自信なんてないですよ
No, not at all!
駄目だった時の反省会をすぐ できるようにと 小杉さんに頼んで来ました
I asked Kosugi if I could come here so that if it doesn't pass, we could have a meeting right away about what went wrong.
ねえ 小杉さん
Isn't that right, Kosugi?
今回 連載になるのは この2本
This time, two manga will be serialized.
1本は蒼樹 紅 「神様がくれた」
The first one is Aoki Kou's What God Gave Me.
もう1本は
And the second...
mogakinagara saikou no yume wo
The times when I fight and struggle and dream
katachi ni suru kono shunkan ga suki sa
of all the things I want in life is the best
tatakau you na te wo tsunagu you na
That's when I feel the bond between us and our strength to fight
kankaku ga shigekiteni da ne
Our view of the world overlaps and stimulates us
kousa shite
dakara motto migakou jibun rashiku arou
Let us polish ourselves, be more like how we should be
tsuzuita michi ni aru hazu
The future can be found on the path we walk
mirai wa
shinzuru mono ga chigau nakamatachi
My comrades believe in different things than me
Rival...and Friend!
butsukariau Pride
Our pride clashes
yuzurenai kore kara mo kokoro no mama susumou yo
I can't give up on it, I have to do what my heart commands me to do
junbi wa dekita
I'm ready
ikki ni kakeagaru tame no
I've got the unbending pride
akiramenai Pride
to run to the top now
hisshi nanda yo suki dakara suki wo mune ni susumu n da
This is my only choice, this is what I love and this is what I'll do
donna ashita ga matteru ka shiranai
I don't know what tomorrow will be like
asu mo
But I know that tomorrow, again,
bokura wa
girigiri
ganbatteru darou
we will do our best to get by
Getitng ideas from the Internet?
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ネットでアイデアを募るなんて
This is the new "friendship, hard work, and victory."
これが新しい友情努力勝利ですよ
Is it really okay to make a manga like this?!
こんな方法で作品を作っていいのか
Examination and
Provocation
Next time: Examination and Provocation.
どんな手段でも夢を掴んだものが勝ちだ
No matter what method you use,
whoever grabs their dream wins.