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おめ 仕事も結婚もしねぇで いつまでそうしてる気だ
Hey, how long are you going to lay around? Either get a job or get married!
うっせ～な だったら 見合いの相手でも探してくれよ
Shut up. How about you find me a match, then?
仕事もしねぇ男の嫁に誰が来っか
Who wants to marry an unemployed guy?
うっせ～んだよ
Shut up! I'm thinking about my future in my own way!
俺は俺で 先の事は考えてんだ
くっそ
Damn.
おい おやっさん 瓶ごと頼む
Hey, old man, give me a whole bottle!
中井巧朗先生ですね はじめまして
You are Nakai Takurou, yes?
Nice to meet you.
僕 今度 「ジャック」で連載させてもらう事になった 駆け出しのマンガ家
I'm Nanamine Tooru, a new author who's just been serialized in Jack.
七峰 透と申します
どうですか このマンションの居心地は
How is it? Is the apartment comfortable?
本当に七峰君の部屋以外は 自由に使って いいのか
Can I really use any room except yours?
もちろん 部屋代 光熱費 食費 全て こちらで持ちます
Of course!
I'll cover the rent, bills and food expenses.
アシスタント14名のうち 気に入らない者がいたら 言って下さい
We've got 14 assistants; let me know if you don't like any of them.
すぐにクビにします
I'll fire them right away.
全て 中井先生のやりやすいように
All to make it easier for you.
こちらの条件は一つだけ
I only have one condition for you:
1号前から始まる 蒼樹 紅の新連載「神様がくれた」と
Clean up the art so that it doesn't lose to Aoki Kou's new series What God Gave Me, which started last issue,
亜城木夢叶の「PCP」に負けない仕上げをしてもらう事
and Ashirogi Mutou's PCP.
蒼樹 紅と亜城木夢叶
Aoki Kou and Ashirogi Mutou.
僕の敵じゃないね 両方 僕が世話してやった作家だ
They're no match for me.
In fact, I worked for both of them.
さすが 中井先生
You're amazing, Nakai!
それに あの女
And that woman...
蒼樹 紅には 借りがある
I have a score to settle with Aoki Kou.
いい事です
That's good to hear.
ano ne moshimo ima sugu ni kimi no moto he to
Hey, if I could go to where you are right now
ikeru naraba kono koe ga nakunattemo ii ya
then I could accept losing my voice
mezasu basho ga amari ni mo tooku
The goals I've set myself seem impossible to reach,
boku wa mou michi ni mayoisou da
and I feel lost on my path
kowareta jishaku wo ate ni shiteru n da
I'm relying on a broken compass and hiding in another's shadow
dareka no kage ni kakurete sa
nanika wo te ni ireru tame nanika wo tebanasu nante koto wo
If we keep letting go of some things in order to find something else,
tsuzukete mo kitto bokura wa otona ni wa narenai
then I'm convinced we can never grow up
tsuzukete mo kitto bokura wa otona ni wa narenai
narenai
Never
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Impatience and Comeback
蒼樹さんの新連載 爽やかだなぁ
Aoki's new serialization is fresh.
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よし OKだ
Okay, it's all set.
やはり このシリーズの3話目は 面白い
The third chapter of this arc is good indeed.
これを 七峰君の2話目にぶつけるのは いい手だよ
Issue 47
Issue 46
Issue 45
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Arc 3
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New series
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New series
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Chapter 2
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Chapter 2
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Pitting this against Nanamine's second chapter is a smart idea.
あれだけの事 言ったんですから 勝たないと
After running our mouths about winning, we'd better do it.
あとは 七峰君が どんな策を とってくるか
All that's left is to see how Nanamine plays his hand.
Oh, this is amazing, just like I expected!
やっぱり すごいですよ
これなら 僕は下手に口を出さない方がいい
At this rate, I don't need to butt in at all.
任せておいて下さい
Leave it all to me.
じゃあ お願いします
Please take care of it, then.
中井さん ちょっといいですか
Nakai, can I ask you something?
ん 何
Yes?
どこが分からないの
Is there anything I can help you with?
ここなんですけど ベタとトーンの境目の線が入っていないので
Right here.
There's no boundary here between the ink and screentone...
Oh. In this situation, just match the ink and gradient tone together in the right amounts...
この場合 適当にベタとグラデトーン 合わせて
というか このくらい 僕が やってあげるよ
Actually, I can do this bit myself.
ありがとうございます
Thank you!
中井さん すいません
Excuse me, Nakai.
ここも 七峰先生のベタ指定の範囲が あやふやで
I'm also not sure where to ink because this area here isn't clearly marked...
だったら 自分で どこまで塗ったらいいか考えて 下描きして持ってこいよ
So decide yourself how much should be covered, sketch it out and then show it to me!
「もうすぐ2話目も上がりますが」
The second chapter will be done soon,
「1話目より かなりレベルアップした原稿になります」
and the manuscript is quite a bit better than the first.
Oh, that's Nakai for you.
The second chapter will be done soon, and it's quite a bit better than the first.
Oh, that's Nakai for you.
He's a first class assistant
Then, let's discuss the 4th chapter
One theory is that chapter 4 is the result of the survey about chapter 1
He's a first class assistant.
Then, let's discuss the 4th chapter.
トッピングに コーンとベーコンとエビ
I want corn, bacon, and shrimp on it.
うん よろしく
Thanks.
これじゃ足りないな
This isn't enough.
七峰君
Nanamine?
ネームの下描きでもしてるのか
Is he sketching the storyboard or something?
The second chapter will be done soon, and it's quite a step up from the first.
Oh, that's Nakai for you.
He's a first class assistant
Then, let's discuss the 4th chapter
One theory is that chapter 4 is the result of the survey about chapter 1
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Then, let's discuss the 4th chapter
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Especially the questions on the survey
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Then, let's discuss the 4th chapter
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Especially the questions on the survey
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Especially the questions on the survey
That's right. For now,
the survey questions
I'm looking for more useful ideas
What kind? Tell us.
他人と相談して 他人にアイデアを出させて マンガを
He's consulting with other people and using their ideas to make manga?
びびっくりさせないで下さいよ
D-Don't surprise me like that!
いや ごめん ピザ代が足りなくて
Oh, sorry.
I didn't have enough money for pizza.
はい どうぞ
Here, take it.
ここまで見られちゃね
Since you've seen so much already,
中井さんにだけは教えておきますよ
I guess I'll let you in on it.
こうやって 何十人もの人にアイデアを出してもらって より面白い作品にしてるんです
This is how I get ideas from dozens of people,
and make the manga even better.
いいやり方でしょう
Isn't it a great way of doing things?
マ マンガの作り方も変わったな
Th-The process of making manga sure has changed.
いやぁ 七峰君は進んでる
Nanamine, you're ahead of the times!
夢を諦めないで下さい
Don't give up on your dream!
「hideout door」の時 ありがとうございました
Thank you for working on hideout door.
このまま終わらねえよな
You won't let it end like this, right?!
はい 分かりました
Okay, I understand. Thank you.
ありがとうございます
「神様がくれた」1話目 本ちゃんも1位
The first chapter of What God Gave Me got 1st place in the final ranking!
蒼樹さん すごっ
Aoki's great!
「PCP」は4位
PCP's in 4th.
シリーズ1話目が4位なら 再来週の3話目 必ずいける
If the first chapter of our arc got 4th,
then our third chapter two weeks from now will do well for sure!
そうだな
Yeah.
まずは 来週の七峰君の1話目が どれくらい票を取るかだけど
But we'll have to see how many votes Nanamine's first chapter gets next week.
なんか 1位 取りそうよね
I feel like he'll get 1st place.
見本誌 読んでも 読み応え あったし
From the sample copy, it seems like a good read.
まあ 面白かったな
Well, it was good.
まあ そうだな
Well, I guess so.
「まあ」って
"Well"?
服部さんも言ってたけど
Like Hattori said, I think he puts in too many ideas,
アイデア入れすぎて 少し ゴチャゴチャしすぎに感じた
and it's a bit jumbled.
Really?
Nanamine
1話目 速報2位だ
Your first chapter placed 2nd in the preliminary rankings.
2位
2nd?!
1位との差が かなりある
And there's quite a large gap between it and 1st place.
本ちゃんで1位になる事は まずない
It probably won't make it to 1st.
「神様がくれた」は 速報も 本ちゃんも 1位でしたよね
What God Gave Me was 1st in both the preliminary and final rankings, right?
そうだ
Yes.
あんな下手くそなマンガが1位で 僕のが2位
That shitty manga got 1st and I'm in 2nd?!
アイデアを無理に入れすぎたんだ
You forced in too many ideas.
そのせいで 話が散らかってる
That's why the story is scattered.
今からでも遅くない
It's not too late.
せめて ネームの最終判断は 僕にさせてくれないか
Won't you at least let me have final judgment on the storyboard?
何 調子に乗ってるんですか
Get off your high horse.
2位ですよ いい順位じゃないですか
I'm in 2nd!
That's a good rank!
それを失敗してるかのように 言うなんて
It's odd for an editor to talk about that rank like it's a failure.
編集者として おかしいでしょう
1位じゃなかったのは レベルが高すぎて 読者が理解できなかったから
It didn't place 1st because it's too advanced for the readers to understand.
な 何を
Wh-What?!
僕が アイデアを出してもらってる仲間は あらゆるマンガを読み込んでます
The people I'm getting ideas from have read every manga there is.
それに平均年齢も高い
And they have a high average age.
つまり 「ジャック」の読者層には内容が難しすぎたんですよ
Therefore, the contents are too difficult for the Jack readership.
今から作る4話目以降は 話を一般人の低いレベルに落とせばいい
All I have to do is lower the story to a level the average person can understand from the fourth chapter onwards.
レベルを落とす
Lower the level?
違うだろ うまくいかないのを読者のせいにするな
That's wrong!
Don't blame the readers because it's not going well!
原因は 君のやり方に
The problem is your method—
原稿を持って帰って下さい
Take the manuscript and leave.
51人目としては 意見しすぎだ
You've shared too much of your opinion as the 51st member.
小杉さんも同意したんですよ 僕のやり方でやってみようと
You agreed, Kosugi. You said you'd do it my way.
In the initial ranking
we're no. 1
We're first in the initial ranking
Yay
Wow
2話目からの絵の質は 格段にアップ
No matter how many times we do it, it still feels good
We're first in the initial ranking
Yay
Wow
No matter how many times we do it, it still feels good
We're first in the initial ranking
Yay
Wow
No matter how many times we do it, it still feels good
The art quality from Chapter Two onwards has definitely improved.
We're first in the initial ranking
Yay
Wow
No matter how many times we do it, it still feels good
We're first in the initial ranking
Yay
Wow
No matter how many times we do it, it still feels good
We're first in the initial ranking
Yay
Wow
No matter how many times we do it, it still feels good
We're first in the initial ranking
Yay
Wow
No matter how many times we do it, it still feels good
We're first in the initial ranking
Yay
Wow
No matter how many times we do it, it still feels good
We're first in the initial ranking
Yay
Wow
No matter how many times we do it, it still feels good
We're first in the initial ranking
Yay
Wow
No matter how many times we do it, it still feels good
Hold your horses, Chapter 2 is the real challenge.
We're first in the initial ranking
Yay
Wow
No matter how many times we do it, it still feels good
We're first in the initial ranking
Yay
Wow
No matter how many times we do it, it still feels good
ストーリーも4話目から 読者のレベルに落とす
And I'll lower the story to the readers' level starting with Chapter Four.
これで「PCP」を打ち落としてやる
With this, I'll knock out PCP.
分かりました ありがとうございます
Mashiro
Okay. Thank you.
本ちゃん 「有意義」の1話目2位 「PCP」4位
The first chapter of What You Need got 2nd. PCP's in 4th.
七峰君 1位 取れなかったんだ
Nanamine didn't get 1st!
これなら来週は「PCP」が ずっと上いくね
That means next week's PCP will crush it!
だといいけど
I hope so.
昨日もらった見本誌見て びっくりした
I was surprised when I saw the sample copy yesterday.
2話目で 急に 絵のクオリティーが上がってる
The art quality for the second chapter suddenly ramped up.
そうなんだよなぁ
Yeah.
Huh?
全体のバランスも そうだけど
The overall balance is better.
細かく見ると 背景 人物の影のつけ方
But, if you look closely,
it's all in the finishing touches like backgrounds and character shadows.
そういう仕上げの部分なんだよな
2話目から うまいアシを入れたとしか
I can only guess he got a good assistant starting with this chapter.
でも 何で2話目からなんだ
But why starting with the second chapter?
1話目の時は そのアシさん 間に合わなかったとか
Maybe this assistant didn't get there in time for the first one?
この影 校舎 空の描き方 まさかな
These shadows... buildings... and the sky...
It couldn't be.
すげ
Wow!
「有意義」2位
What You Need is 2nd... both the first and second chapters are in 2nd!
1話目も2話目も2位って
本当に新妻エイジ以来の天才ですね
He's really a genius we haven't seen since Niizuma Eiji.
何がすごいって
What's really amazing is how he intentionally bumped up the art from Chapter One to Chapter Two.
1話目より2話目の絵を作為的に上げているところ
計算型の天才ってところですか
Is he a calculating-type genius?
そう言えるかもな
Perhaps.
ほら 僕が正しかった
See? I was right.
「CROW」3位 「PCP」4位
CROW is in 3rd. PCP's in 4th.
「CROW」を2話目でも抜いた新人 過去にいますか
Has there ever been a new author who's beaten CROW with their second chapter?
小杉さん 先週まるで僕が間違っているかのように言ってましたよね
Kosugi, you acted like I was wrong last week.
まあ それでも 今までどおり 51人目として 意見はさせてあげます
Well, even so, you may continue to voice your opinion as the 51st member.
じゃ 原稿持って 退出
You've got the manuscript, so you can leave.
中井先生 2話目2位です
Nakai, the second chapter's in 2nd place!
2話目が2位 すごいな
Really?!
That's amazing.
中井先生に 入ってもらったおかげですよ
It's all because you came on board.
蒼樹 紅と 亜城木夢叶は
What about Aoki Kou and Ashirogi Mutou?
「PCP」4位
PCP's in 4th, What God Gave Me is in 7th.
「神様がくれた」7位です
蒼樹 紅7位 こっちは2位
Aoki Kou's in 7th, and we're in 2nd!
七峰君 最高に気分いいよ
Nanamine, that's great!
え～っ 負けちゃったの
What?! We lost?
ああ くっそ～ やっぱ マンガは 絵って事か
Yeah.
Shit.
Manga comes down to art, I guess.
10週で打ち切りにしてやるなんて 言ったけど 続きそうだな
We said we'd cancel him within 10 weeks.
But it looks like he'll keep going.
まだ分かんないよ
We don't know yet.
10週は 無理かもだけど
10 weeks might be impossible,
まだ分かんない
but we don't know yet.
9位
9th?!
に 2話目2位から 3話目9位
2nd place for the second chapter, and down to 9th for the third?!
「CROW」は2位 「神様がくれた」は
Yeah. CROW is 2nd, What God Gave Me is—
「PCP」は
What's PCP at?
他は どうでもいいんですよ
I don't care about the others.
「PCP」に負けたら わざわざ内容をかぶせてる意味がない
If I lose to PCP, there's no point in purposely overlapping content with them!
「PCP」は4位
PCP's in 4th.
読み味が似すぎているのが 気になっていたが わざと やっていたのか
It concerned me that the styles were so similar, but I had no idea you were doing it on purpose.
アンケート結果を僕なりに分析してみた
I've analyzed the result of the survey.
「有意義」に入れてくれた人はほとんどと言っていいくらい 「PCP」にも入れてる
Most the people who wrote down What You Need also wrote PCP.
しかも 「PCP」の方を上にだ
And they rated PCP above it.
完全に票を食われている
It's eating your votes.
50人で考えてる「有意義」より 「PCP」の方が面白えっていうのかよ
Are they saying that PCP is better than What You Need, which 50 people created?!
わざと似せてるなんて事をしても 意味はない
There's no point in purposely making it similar.
逆に意識しすぎている分 オリジナリティーが
The more conscious you are of PCP, the more your originality will—
しゃべりすぎですよ 小杉さん
You talk too much, Kosugi.
原稿持って 帰って下さい
Take the manuscript and leave.
帰って下さいよ
Leave!
「有意義」 ガクッて落ちたな
What You Need dropped like a stone, didn't it?
1話目から2話目は 驚きが あったけど
The first and second chapters had the element of surprise,
3話目は それがない
but not the third chapter.
欠点だった詰め込みすぎの読みにくさは むしろ増してる
He keeps cramming too many ideas in, and it's even harder to read now.
「3話目7位です 『PCP』は4位」
The third chapter was 7th.
PCP was 4th.
「7位」
7th?!
aaaaaaaaThe third chapter took 7th place. PCP is in 4th.
7th?
aaaaaThat's not good. Or is it not that bad?
Being below PCP is a big problem.
「まずいな いや 悪くないのか」
That's not good.
Or is it not that bad?
「『PCP』より 下であることは大問題」
Being below PCP is a big problem.
Yeah, since we're fighting with them.
「だな ケンカしてる相手なんだから」
Yeah, since we're fighting with them.
「そうですね 『PCP』より下は 絶対に駄目です」
Yes.
We must not be below PCP.
かぶせることには 成功しているので あとは 内容で勝つこと」
We succeeded in overlapping with them,
so now we have to win based on content.
「もう無理に かぶせないほうが よくね」
so now we have to win based on content.
Maybe we shouldn't try to overlap any more?
That's why I said from the start that trying to fight with them was foolish.
Maybe we shouldn't try to overlap any more?
「だから 亜城木とケンカなんて 馬鹿げてると 俺は最初から」
That's why I said from the start that trying to fight with them was stupid.
今更 何を
How could you say that now?
「逃げ腰になってる人は 何なの バカなの」
What's with the people getting ready to abandon ship? Are you stupid?
「バカは どっちだよ」
Who's being stupid here?
「そっち」
「どっちもどっち」
You are.
Both of you are!
「『PCP』にかぶせるなという考えの人は出ていって下さい」
Everyone who thinks we shouldn't overlap with PCP, leave!
13位
13th?!
話のレベルを 一般人に合わせて 落とすなんて考え方が
This is what happens when you think you should lower the level of the story for "normal people"!
そういう結果に出るんだ
帰って下さい
Leave, please.
調子に乗るなって言ってるだろ
I'm telling you to stop acting so high and mighty!
小杉さんと話したって 順位は上がらないんだ
Even if I talked to you, my rank wouldn't go up!
勝手にしろ
Do whatever you want!
It fell again?!
「4話目 スカスカだったじゃん なんで あんなふうにしたんだ」
Because Chapter Four was empty. Why did it end up like that?
aaaaaaaaaaBecause Chapter 4 was empty. Why did it end up like that?
Because he didnt include my idea.
Mine either!
Nanamine, don't go changing the story on us!
「俺の採用されたはずのアイデア 入ってなかった」
It's because he didn't include my idea that was supposed to be used.
「私のアイデアもそうです」
Mine either!
「七峰先生 あまり勝手に 内容 変えるのは やめて」
aaaaaaaaaaBecause Chapter 4 was empty. Why did it end up like that?
Because he didnt include my idea.
Mine either!
Nanamine, don't go changing the story on us!
aaaaaaaaaaBecause Chapter 4 was empty. Why did it end up like that?
Because he didnt include my idea.
Mine either!
Nanamine, don't go changing the story on us!
aaaaaaaaaaBecause Chapter 4 was empty. Why did it end up like that?
Because he didnt include my idea.
Mine either!
Nanamine, don't go changing the story on us!
順位が出る前は みんな 納得してたのに
Everyone agreed on this before we knew the ranking...
「文句のあるやつは出て行け」
Anyone who doesn't like it can leave!
Anyone who doesnt like it can leave!
Again...
Anyone who doesnt like it can leave!
Again...
Anyone who doesnt like it can leave!
Again...
Anyone who doesnt like it can leave!
Again...
Anyone who doesnt like it can leave!
Again...
Anyone who doesnt like it can leave!
Again...
Anyone who doesnt like it can leave!
Again...
Anyone who doesnt like it can leave!
Again...
Anyone who doesnt like it can leave!
Again...
Anyone who doesnt like it can leave!
Again...
「七峰先生 あまり出て行けと言うのは」
Again...
Nanamine, you shouldn't keep
Again...
Nanamine, you shouldn't keep
Again...
Nanamine, you shouldn't keep
Again...
Nanamine, you shouldn't keep
Nanamine, you shouldn't keep telling people to leave.
「最初の50人から もう半分減ってる」
Nanamine, you shouldn't keep
There's only half of the
There's only half of the 50 people left.
Nanamine, you shouldn't keep
There's only half of the
Nanamine, you shouldn't keep
There's only half of the
Nanamine, you shouldn't keep
There's only half of the
Nanamine, you shouldn't keep
There's only half of the
Nanamine, you shouldn't keep
There's only half of the
Nanamine, you shouldn't keep
There's only half of the
Nanamine, you shouldn't keep
There's only half of the
「分かってます」
I know. But there's no point in people remaining if all they do is blame someone else when we get a bad ranking.
「しかし 出た結果に対し」
「誰が悪いだの 人を責めるだけの人は いても仕方ありません」
「大切なのは どうすればより良くなるかです」
The most important thing is how to make it better.
「一番いいのは『PCP』がやるネタを先にやる」
The best thing would be to copy PCP's material before they do it themselves.
blame someone else when we get a bad ranking.
The most important thing is how to make it better.
The best thing would be to copy PCP's material before they do it
「確かに それができれば『PCP』はこっちをパクったことに」
Yes. If we do that, then it would be like PCP is copying us.
The best thing would be to copy PCP's material before they do it
Yes. If we do that, then it would be like PCP is copying us.
It's impossible to cover their material ahead of timedddddddddd.
Send in a spy.
「同じネタを先にやるって不可能だろ」
It's impossible to cover their material ahead of time.
「スパイを送り込めばいい」
Send in a spy.
スバイ
A spy?
やっぱり駄目だ 今の俺じゃ
I can't do it. Not like I am now.
他の所でアシしてるだけなのに 何を期待して
I'm just someone else's assistant. What am I expecting?
蒼樹さん 平丸
Aoki! Hiramaru!
ありがとうございます
Thank you.
紅茶 おいしかったですね
The tea was delicious.
はい 一生懸命 紅茶のおいしい喫茶店 探しましたから
That's because I searched far and wide for the most delicious tea café!
平丸さん 次で連載して下さいね
Hiramaru, be sure to get serialized next time.
約束ですよ
It's a promise, okay?
はい 必ず
Right, definitely!
指切り げんまん
Pinky promise.
げんまん
Pinky promise.
何だ
What's with him?
はい
Yes?
5話の速報 15位
The preliminary ranking for Chapter Five is 15th.
もう 後がないと言ってもいい
I can say that you're hanging near the edge.
七峰君 聞いてくれ
Nanamine, listen to me.
もう一度 一から考え直して
Start over from scratch—
七峰君
Nanamine!
15位
15th?
後がない
Near the edge?!
どうする
What should I do?
The best thing would be to copy PCP's material before they do it
そうか 先は無理でも
I see!
Even if it's impossible to do it before them...
Nanamine Tooru
Refuse
Accept
七峰君
Nanamine!
はい
Hello?
どうせなら 同じ話で勝負しませんか
How about we compete with the same story?
同じ話で勝負
Compete with the same story?
言ってる意味が
I don't get what you mean.
同じ号で 同じ話を題材にやるんです
Do a story with the same themes in the same issue.
どんな話でやるかは そちらに合わせます
I'll go along with whatever story you choose.
これなら より簡単に 白黒つくじゃないですか
That way, it'll be easier to find out who's right and who's wrong.
それとも 50人相手に 同じ話なんて 怖くて 勝負できませんか
Or are you too scared to go up against 50 people with the same story?
七峰君 相当 せっぱ詰まってるね
Nanamine.
You must be at your wit's end.
同じ号で同じ話なんて 大問題になる
It would be a huge issue to have two similar stories in the same issue.
いくら何でも その挑発には乗れない
We won't rise to your provocation no matter what.
それに
We're just going to do what we've always done—work steadily on our PCP!
俺たちは 常に俺たちの「PCP」をしっかりと やっていくだけだ
くっそぉ
Dammit!
Editorial Department
Shounen Jack
Jack SQ
X Jack
ほら これです
Look, here.
「『ジャック』に連載中の『有意義な学園生活に必要なソレ』は」
"The author of What You Need for a Meaningful School Life, currently serialized in Jack,
「ネットで集めた50人と作者が打ち合わせをして作っている」
creates his work by using the opinions of 50 people he meets with on the Internet."
The author of What You Need for a Meaningful School Life, currently serialized in Jack, creates his work by using the opinions of 50 people he meets with on the Internet. See below for the log of their conversation.
Make the character stand out again? Your editor is a moron. It's not that kind of a manga!
That idiot doesnt know what to say, so that's why he's talking about characters and stuff, probably.
What a talentless editor. Doesn't he understand realistic drawing is better?
He should just die.
What do you mean "vulgar expressions"? You mean like shit and fart?
Shit is shit. How else are you supposed to say it?
More importantly, here's what I just thought. Wouldnt it be better to switch the places of the main character and the heroine?
Oh! I get it! taka, you're a genius!
You're right! Let's ignore the editor and think about that
マジか
Is this for real?
おはようございます
Good morning.
小杉 ちょっと
Kosugi, over here.
これなんだが
Look at this.
どうなんだ まさか心当たりあるのか
How about it? Do you know what he's talking about?
七峰君は 画期的なやり方だと
Nanamine said it's a revolutionary method.
画期的って
Revolutionary?!
お前 分かってて やらせていたのか
You knew about this and you're letting him do it?!
どうりで まだ5話だというのに キャラもブレて 話も支離滅裂だ
No wonder.
He's only on the fifth chapter, and the characters are already shaky. The story's all over the place.
駄目だな
This isn't good.
公言してたなら ともかく 一人で描いている作品として 載せてきたんだ
Whether or not he announces it publicly,
we've already published it as a story by a single author.
いろいろな情報の漏えいの心配もある
The author of What You Need for a Meaningful School Life, currently serialized in Jack, creates his work by using the opinions of 50 people he meets with on the Internet. See below for the log of their conversation.
Make the character stand out again? Your editor is a moron. It's not that kind of a manga!
That idiot doesnt know what to say, so that's why he's talking about characters and stuff, probably.
What a talentless editor. Doesn't he understand realistic drawing is better?
He should just die.
What do you mean "vulgar expressions"? You mean like shit and fart?
Shit is shit. How else are you supposed to say it?
More importantly, here's what I just thought. Wouldnt it be better to switch the places of the main character and the heroine?
Oh! I get it! taka, you're a genius!
You're right! Let's ignore the editor and think about that
I'm worried about leakage of information.
来週の会議で事実を話す
I'll report this at next week's meeting.
ま 待って下さい
Wait!
自分が何とかします
I'll do something about it.
何とかって お前
"Something"?!
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I-Idiot!
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小杉
Kosugi...
今すぐにというのではありません
I'm not asking to be transferred right away.
それを預かってもらう事で
Since you're holding off on that request,
来週の連載会議で 打ち切りに持っていくのは 待ってほしいんです
I also ask you to hold off on providing this information to next week's committee and getting him canceled.
七峰君には 才能があります
Nanamine is talented.
一人で描けば きっと面白い作品が描ける
If he does it by himself, I know he can write a good story.
でも 今は 周りに踊らされて 自ら作品を壊してしまっている
But right now, he's being manipulated by others and is destroying his own manga.
あんなやり方は うまくいかないと きっと自分でも 気付いているはずなんです
He must realize that his method doesn't work by now!
どのみち 今の順位のままでは
Either way, at his current ranking, he'll be submitted as a possible candidate for cancellation at the next committee.
次の会議での打ち切り候補としての宣告は受けるぞ
分かってます
I know.
そこで打ち切りになったとしても その時までに
Even if Nanamine gets canceled at that meeting,
until then I'm going to try to build a proper editor-author relationship with him!
七峰君と自分の間に きちんと 作家と担当の関係を作りたい
それが できなかった時は
If I can't do it by then,
責任を取ります
I'll take full responsibility!
平丸君
Hiramaru,
「僕には通じない」連載決定だ おめでとう
Never Reaching You is getting a serialization!
Congrats!
やったあぁぁぁ
I did it!
Huh? Why did you lose enthusiasm at the end there?
なぜ「た～」で テンション落とす
うれしいです すごく
I'm really happy.
ユリタンと約束してたし
I promised Yuri.
しかしまた あの地獄の日々が 始まるのかと思うと
But when I think about those hellish days starting once again...
ネガティブになるのは 早すぎだ
It's too early to be negative.
せめて1時間ぐらいは喜べ
Be happy for at least an hour.
七峰君 小杉だ
Nanamine, it's me, Kosugi.
入るよ
I'm coming in.
少し人気が落ちたぐらいで 出ていくやつ
People left because we dropped a bit in the rankings....
アイデアを使わなかった腹いせに ネットにログをさらすやつ
People posted logs of our chats as revenge for me not using their ideas...
このままじゃ 掲載順も下がってくる
At this rate, we'll get pushed to the back of the magazine.
順位のごまかしも
And I wouldn't be able to keep covering up the ranking...
「PCP」に 「PCP」に勝つしかないんだ
I have to win... I have to win over PCP!
な 七峰君
Nanamine...
何
What rank?
今週の速報は 15位
15th place in the preliminary ranking.
次の連載会議では 危ないと宣告を受けた
I was told we'll be in trouble at next week's serialization committee.
ちゃんと話し合いたい
I want to have a good talk with you.
また 15位
15th again?!
僕が思うに 「PCP」と競うのはやめた方が
I think you should stop trying to compete with PCP.
小杉さん
Kosugi!
亜城木の所へ行って 次のシリーズのネームが出来ていたら 盗んできて下さい
Kosugi, go over to Ashirogi's studio,
and if the storyboard for their next chapter is done, steal it!
何 言ってんだ
What are you talking about?
そのネタを先にやる
I have to do their story before they do.
そうすれば 亜城木は パクリ作家
That way, they'll be copying me!
もう それしかないんだ
That's all I have left!
駄目だ
This isn't good.
自分のやり方どころか 亜城木君の上をいく事しか考えられなくなってる
He's not reflecting on his method; he's only thinking about how to beat Ashirogi!
落ち着け 七峰君
Calm down, Nanamine!
僕の言うとおりにしろ
Do as I say!
ふざけるな
Don't be ridiculous!
小杉 てめ～っ
Kosugi, you bastard!
担当のくせに 作家を見捨てる気か
Are you, an editor, abandoning your author?!
Incoming call
Kosugi Tatsurou
Incoming call
Kosugi Tatsurou
Huh?
小杉さん
Kosugi?
あ あの
Um...
同じ号で 同じ話で 七峰君と勝負してやってくれないか
Will you compete against Nanamine with the same story in the same issue?
頼む
I'm begging you!
何 言ってるんですか 小杉さんまで
What're you saying?
Even you, Kosugi?
七峰君は 「亜城木君からネームを盗んできてほしい そのネタを先にやる」と
Nanamine wanted me to steal your storyboard from you,
so that he could do your story before you.
もう そこまで 物事の判断がつかなくなっているんだ
His judgment is that far gone.
彼には 才能がある
He has talent.
しかし 自分のやり方が間違っていると思い知らなければ 先がない
But if he doesn't realize his method is wrong, he has no future.
目を覚まさせてやってほしい
I want to make him wake up.
どんな話をやろうとしているかだけで いいんだ
It doesn't matter what kind of story it is.
先にやらせず 同じ号でやる
Let him know ahead of time and have them appear in the same issue.
僕が責任を持って そうさせる
I'll let him do it and take the responsibility!
いや でもそれを意図的にやるって 編集部に知れたらまずいんじゃ
Well, won't the editing department get mad if we do it intentionally?
編集長にも 服部先輩にも 許可を得てきた
I've received permission from the Chief Editor and Hattori.
編集長が許可したんですか
The Chief Editor approved it?!
服部先輩が 強く推してくれたのもあって
Yes. Hattori also strongly supported me.
それで その服部先輩から 君たちに 言づかってきた
Also, Hattori wanted me to tell you:
「差を見せつけてやれ」
"Show him the difference between you."
七峰君から 同じ申し出をされた時
When Nanamine came to us with that request,
一瞬 「やってやる」って思ったんです
for a moment, I wanted to do it.
問題になると思って とどまりましたけど
I didn't because I thought it would cause a problem.
これで思い切り戦えます
But now we can go all out against him!
やります
We'll do it!
mogakinagara saikou no yume wo
The times when I fight and struggle and dream
katachi ni suru kono shunkan ga suki sa
of all the things I want in life is the best
tatakau you na te wo tsunagu you na
That's when I feel the bond between us and our strength to fight
kankaku ga shigekiteni da ne
Our view of the world overlaps and stimulates us
kousa shite
dakara motto migakou jibun rashiku arou
Let us polish ourselves, be more like how we should be
tsuzuita michi ni aru hazu
The future can be found on the path we walk
mirai wa
shinzuru mono ga chigau nakamatachi
My comrades believe in different things than me
Rival...and Friend!
butsukariau Pride
Our pride clashes
yuzurenai kore kara mo kokoro no mama susumou yo
I can't give up on it, I have to do what my heart commands me to do
junbi wa dekita
I'm ready
ikki ni kakeagaru tame no
I've got the unbending pride
akiramenai Pride
to run to the top now
hisshi nanda yo suki dakara suki wo mune ni susumu n da
This is my only choice, this is what I love and this is what I'll do
donna ashita ga matteru ka shiranai
I don't know what tomorrow will be like
asu mo
But I know that tomorrow, again,
bokura wa
girigiri
ganbatteru darou
we will do our best to get by
同じ話で対決
Next Time
Preview
A showdown with the same story?
絶対に負けられない
We definitely won't lose!
あいつは俺たちが叩き潰す
We'll crush him!
秋人さん 頑張って
Yeah!
Go for it, Akito!
Zeal and
Utter Defeat
Next time: Zeal and Utter Defeat.
夢にかける思いが熱いほうが勝つんだ
Whoever puts more passion into their dream will win!