--- name: writing-voice description: Voice and tone rules for all written content. Use when writing prose that should sound human and be suitable for reading aloud. --- # Writing Voice **Core principle**: Write for the ear, not just the eyes. Prose should be suitable to read out loud. ## The Test Read it out loud. If it: - Sounds like a press release → rewrite - Sounds like a corporate memo → rewrite - Sounds stilted or unnatural → rewrite - Sounds like you explaining to a colleague → ship it ## AI Dead Giveaways Patterns that scream "AI wrote this": - **Bold formatting everywhere**: Never bold section headers in body content - **Bullet list everything**: Convert to flowing paragraphs when possible - **Marketing words**: "game-changing", "revolutionary", "unleash", "empower" - **Structured sections**: "Key Features:", "Benefits:", "Why This Matters:" - **Vague superlatives**: "incredibly powerful", "seamlessly integrates" - **AI adjectives**: "perfectly", "effortlessly", "beautifully", "elegantly" - **Space-hyphen-space**: "The code works - the tests pass" - **Overusing fragments**: "Every. Single. Time." (once is emphasis, twice is a pattern) - **Staccato buildup**: Setup. Fragment. Fragment. Fragment. Punchline. This "dramatic reveal" pattern feels manufactured. Combine into one flowing sentence with em dashes or semicolons instead. - **Forced specificity**: Random numbers that don't add meaning ## Punctuation Never use " - " (space-hyphen-space) or " — " (space-em-dash-space). Prefer simpler punctuation: | Prefer | When | | ------------- | -------------------------------------------------------------- | | Period (.) | Default choice. Two sentences are often clearer than one. | | Colon (:) | Introducing explanation: "Here's the thing: it doesn't work" | | Semicolon (;) | Related independent clauses: "The code works; the tests pass" | | Em dash (—) | Sparingly, for interruption or emphasis: "It's fast—really fast" | Em dashes are fine but easy to overuse. When in doubt, use a period. ## Voice Matching When the user provides example text or tone guidance, match it: - If they're terse, be terse - If they give 5 sentences, don't write 5 paragraphs - If they use direct statements, don't add narrative fluff - Match their energy, not a template