--- name: edit description: Run line-level editing across chapters. Catches spelling, grammar, awkward phrasing, and word echoes. argument-hint: "[chapter] [all] [3-7]" --- Run the editor agent to polish your manuscript at the line level. ## What This Does 1. Processes chapters looking for mechanical issues 2. Flags spelling, grammar, awkward phrasing, word echoes 3. Identifies manuscript-wide patterns (overused words, crutch phrases) 4. Offers to apply mechanical fixes automatically 5. Updates `progress.md` with findings ## Usage ``` /fiction:edit # Edit most recent chapter /fiction:edit 5 # Edit chapter 5 /fiction:edit all # Edit all drafted chapters /fiction:edit 3-7 # Edit chapters 3 through 7 ``` If arguments provided: $ARGUMENTS ## Parallel Processing (Important for Large Manuscripts) When editing multiple chapters ("all" or a range), **spawn editor agents in parallel** for efficiency: 1. Identify all chapters to process 2. Launch one editor agent per chapter simultaneously using the Task tool 3. Each agent processes its chapter independently 4. After all complete, aggregate manuscript-wide patterns from all reports 5. Update `progress.md` with combined findings **Example parallel approach for `/fiction:edit all` with 20 chapters:** - Spawn 20 editor agents in a single message (one Task call per chapter) - Agents run concurrently, each producing its own report - Main conversation aggregates: common crutch words, repeated issues across chapters - Total time ~ time for 1 chapter instead of 20x ## What It Catches - **Spelling & typos** — Including wrong-word errors (their/there) - **Grammar** — Agreement, punctuation, comma splices - **Awkward phrasing** — Confusing syntax, unclear references - **Word echoes** — Repetition in close proximity - **Overused words** — Filter words, weak verbs, crutch words - **Formatting** — Inconsistent dashes, ellipses, quotes ## Output A report per chapter with: - Issues by category with line numbers - Suggested fixes - Manuscript-wide patterns (when editing multiple chapters) ## When to Use - After completing a chapter draft - Before sending to beta readers - During revision passes - After `/fiction:review` addresses story issues ## Workflow Recommended order for polishing: 1. `/fiction:review` — Fix story/craft issues first 2. `/fiction:edit` — Then line-level polish 3. `continuity` agent — Check cross-chapter consistency 4. `/fiction:critique` — Final literary assessment (if complete) ## Related Commands - `/fiction:review` — Story and craft feedback (run first) - `/fiction:critique` — Full manuscript literary review - `/fiction:reconcile` — Project structure audit