--- name: review description: Review chapters for coherence, cheesiness, consistency, pace, tone, and character. Suggests specific rewrites. argument-hint: "[chapter] [all] [3-7]" --- Review chapters using the chapter-reviewer agent. ## What This Does 1. Identifies the chapter(s) to review 2. Gathers necessary context (character docs, previous chapter, project tone) 3. Runs a thorough review checking: - Coherence - Cheesiness - Consistency - Pace - Tone - Character voice 4. Provides specific feedback with suggested rewrites 5. Offers to apply rewrites and output revised chapter ## Usage ``` /fiction:review # Review most recent chapter /fiction:review 5 # Review chapter 5 /fiction:review all # Review all drafted chapters /fiction:review 3-7 # Review chapters 3 through 7 /fiction:review chapters/08.md # Review specific file ``` If arguments provided: $ARGUMENTS ## Parallel Processing (Important for Large Manuscripts) When reviewing multiple chapters ("all" or a range), **spawn chapter-reviewer agents in parallel** for efficiency: 1. Identify all chapters to review 2. Load shared context once (character docs, tone guide, project README) 3. Launch one chapter-reviewer agent per chapter using the Task tool 4. Pass shared context + specific chapter + previous chapter to each agent 5. Each agent reviews independently, produces verdict + issues 6. Aggregate results: compile verdicts, flag cross-chapter patterns 7. Update `progress.md` with all review results **Example parallel approach for `/fiction:review all` with 20 chapters:** - Spawn 20 chapter-reviewer agents in a single message - Each receives: its chapter, previous chapter (for continuity), shared context - Agents run concurrently - Main conversation aggregates verdicts and highlights patterns - Total time ~ time for 1-2 chapters instead of 20x ## How It Works (Single Chapter) If no chapter is specified: 1. Check conversation history for recently written/discussed chapter 2. Or find the most recently modified chapter file in the project 3. Or ask the user which chapter to review The review includes: - What works (with specific quotes) - What needs work (with suggested rewrites) - Continuity flags - Verdict (ready to move on / needs revision) ## After Review If issues are found, you'll be asked: "Would you like me to apply these rewrites and output the revised chapter?" Say yes to get the complete revised chapter with all changes applied.