--- title: Notes | Tutorial 34 layout: post date: 2020-08-31 12:00 parent: Tutorial Notes tutorial_link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bZqK-famecE lesson: 34 --- ## review writing/outlining * problem: if I don't feel good about a simpler word use a more technical one * extra parens -> more cluttered * trying to hard to copy what the paper says (outlining) instead of explaining the ideas * idea: maybe should have added commentary at the end of each subsection. * copying the parts i didn't like is confusing -- ppl might as well just read the original. * ET: what are important ideas, only write about those, not redo the rest, give self more leeway to reorganise it, alter the presentation, use own examples, etc. * todo: write alt version - not outlining; explain it myself. ## advance and answer method * example: * the post is in two parts - one advance, one answer ## exercises * tree-out http://curi.us/1595#12793 discussion * analyse first level replies: https://www.lesswrong.com/posts/Ze6PqJK2jnwnhcpnb/chains-bottlenecks-and-optimization * and other material from http://curi.us/2371-analyzing-quotes-objectively-and-socially * work on checklist and improve, check "social dynamics summary notes" ## social dynamics * effort-based analysis * who's putting in how much effort? * who's asking for how much effort? * who's reacting to who * who gets to question who? * who answers? * who ignores counter-party requests? * who gives hints and expects the counter-party to figure out what he means * who's happy with status quo, who want's change, who's needy? * calm is high status * LoLE * who's framing of the issue dominates? * who's signalling expertise? * social thing: okay to lie to prevent people being discouraged