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name: aos-writing-style
description: Use when polishing the prose of an Accounting, Organizations and Society (AOS) manuscript — sustained argumentative writing that carries theory and evidence together, a self-contained abstract, disciplined length despite the absence of a hard cap, and full anonymization for double-anonymized review. Polishes prose; it does not run the submission preflight (aos-submission).
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# Writing Style (aos-writing-style)

## When to trigger

- The draft reads as description (field papers) or as a mechanical hypothesis mill (experiments)
- Sections don't argue — the theory, findings, and discussion sit side by side unconnected
- The abstract summarizes the topic instead of the claim
- Anonymization, references, or length discipline still need a pass

## The AOS register

AOS prose is **essayistic but accountable**: long-form argument in which every interpretive move is anchored to evidence and every theoretical term earns its keep. The reader is interdisciplinary — an organizational sociologist and a JDM psychologist may both referee — so write for the intelligent non-specialist: define tradition-specific vocabulary at first use, and never let jargon substitute for reasoning.

- **Argue continuously.** Each section should advance the claim, not inventory content. Findings sections in field papers interleave excerpt and interpretation — the analysis is *in* the prose, not after it.
- **Voice.** First person is normal and honest in interpretive work ("we came to see the budget meetings as…"); keep it analytic, not confessional. Experimental papers use the plain predictive register: theory → prediction → design → result.
- **Concreteness.** Ground abstractions in the practice: named artifacts (the monthly pack, the risk register), scenes, and actors' words — anonymized but vivid.
- **Terminology ledger.** Fix one name per concept (construct, practice, site pseudonym, condition label) and hold it identical across abstract, text, exhibits, and appendices.

## Length without a cap

AOS publishes long papers and states no rigid word limit in its Guide for Authors (re-check the current guide — norms evolve). Treat that freedom as a discipline test: interpretive papers commonly run 12,000–15,000 words, and every one of them must be load-bearing. Cut scene-setting that does no theoretical work, second examples that prove the same point, and literature reviews of threads the paper never rejoins.

## Front matter

- **Abstract**: one self-contained paragraph — the question, the setting/design, the conceptual answer, and what it changes in the conversation. No citations, no suspense.
- **Keywords** chosen so both accounting and social-science indexers find the paper.
- **Introduction** executes the positioned arc (see `aos-literature-positioning`) and previews the conceptual answer — AOS readers expect to know the claim before the methods.

## Anonymization and mechanics

- Double-anonymized review: strip names, affiliations, acknowledgments, grant numbers, and self-revealing phrasing ("in our earlier study at this site") from the manuscript file; cite your own work in the third person.
- Scrub document properties/metadata; keep identifying material on the separate title page only.
- References in the journal's author–date style; reconcile the reference list against the current Guide for Authors rather than trusting the citation manager.
- Declare any generative-AI writing assistance per Elsevier policy (a declaration in the manuscript; AI tools cannot be authors).

## The paragraph audit

For a final pass, write each paragraph's job in the margin in five words or fewer ("introduces broker
concept", "handles counter-evidence on X"). Paragraphs with no statable job get cut; adjacent paragraphs
with the same job get merged. This audit is the cheapest route to AOS-grade density.

## Checklist

- [ ] Every section advances the argument; excerpts are interpreted where they appear
- [ ] Tradition vocabulary defined at first use; no undefined jargon
- [ ] Terminology ledger applied across text, exhibits, and appendices
- [ ] Length justified paragraph by paragraph despite the absence of a cap
- [ ] Abstract self-contained: question, design, conceptual answer, consequence
- [ ] Manuscript fully anonymized, metadata scrubbed; author–date references reconciled
- [ ] AI-assistance declaration included if applicable

## Anti-patterns

- **Travelogue field writing**: atmosphere and chronology with the analysis postponed to the discussion.
- **Hypothesis-mill formatting** imposed on interpretive work (H1–H8 scaffolds where no hypotheses exist).
- **Theory-section quarantine**: concepts introduced early, never used again in the findings' language.
- **Citation-armored sentences** — three references per clause in place of an argument.
- **Anonymization leaks** in acknowledgments, footnotes, or file metadata.

## Output format

```
【Register】argumentative throughout? excerpts interpreted in place? ...
【Abstract】self-contained claim stated? ...
【Terminology】ledger applied; jargon defined ...
【Length】words; what was cut and why the rest stays ...
【Anonymity & mechanics】scrubbed; author–date refs reconciled; AI declared ...
【Next step】aos-submission
```