--- name: conext-writing-style description: Use when shaping the prose and structure of an ACM CoNEXT paper — leading with the networking problem and deployment context, tying every claim to a measurement on the real target platform, arguing limitations rather than reciting them, and holding the acmart page budget for long (≤16) and short (≤10) papers. --- # CoNEXT Writing Style Write to the CoNEXT reader: a networking systems/measurement expert who wants the **networking contribution and the evaluation platform on the first page**, evidence **proportional to the claim** and drawn from the **real target**, and a limitations posture visible from the start. Because CoNEXT papers are **PACMNET** journal articles judged in a two-round, one-shot-revision process, the draft must read like a manuscript whose claims are already backed, not a promising sketch. ## The first-page arc Lead with the arc the worked example demonstrates ([`../../resources/worked-examples/01-introduction.md`](../../resources/worked-examples/01-introduction.md)): 1. **The networking problem, in a real deployment context** — a problem an operator, protocol designer, or systems builder recognizes, stated in the first breath. 2. **Why the current state is inadequate** — what existing systems/measurements miss, and why the gap matters on real paths or hardware. 3. **The contribution, as networking claims** — a mechanism, a measured phenomenon, or both, not a model or a score. 4. **Evidence on the real target** — a testbed run, a deployment, or a trace, each claim paired with the measurement that backs it. 5. **What changes for networking + limitations posture** — the payoff for practice, with the central threat named up front rather than deferred. ## Claims tied to measurements - **State the claim as an outcome an operator or protocol cares about** ("completion time for throttled short flows drops"), not as an offline metric ("accuracy is high"). - **Pair each claim with its evidence** and its platform: which testbed, which trace, which vantage points, which baseline. A claim with no matching measurement is the fastest path to a one-shot-revision change-list item. - **Report uncertainty.** Confidence intervals, multiple runs, and effect sizes read as rigor; a single bar with no variance reads as a lab artifact to a measurement reviewer. ## Limitations as argument, not boilerplate CoNEXT reviewers reward a paper that names its own central threat and bounds it. Put the limitation **where the result lives**, not only in a closing section: - If a measurement infers an outcome from a proxy signal, say so and bound it with a ground-truth subset. - If evaluation is on one testbed or one network, scope the generalization claim explicitly. - If a mechanism assumes hardware behavior, state what breaks if the assumption fails. A limitations section that only lists generic caveats ("results may not generalize") wastes the one place you can pre-empt the reviewer's strongest objection. ## Page-budget discipline (acmart) - **Long papers ≤16 pages** text+figures (+ unlimited references + ≤4 appendix pages); **short papers ≤10 pages** (+ unlimited references + ≤2 appendix pages). Verify the current numbers. - References are unlimited, so never sacrifice a citation for space; compress prose, figures, and redundant tables instead. - The appendix budget is small and for supporting, not deciding, material — nothing a reviewer needs to accept the paper should live only there (see [`conext-supplementary`](../conext-supplementary/SKILL.md)). - Do not alter the `acmart` template to reclaim space; editorial compression is the only safe lever. ## Networking-prose specifics - **Define the topology and scale early.** A reader should know what network, what hardware, and what scale before the evaluation. - **Name the baselines honestly** and describe how they were tuned; an untuned strawman is a soundness flag. - **Figures earn their space.** A topology diagram, a CDF, or a time series that a reviewer can read in one glance is worth more than a paragraph; a decorative architecture box is not. - **Anonymize as you write** — refer to your own system and prior work in the third person, and do not name testbeds, operators, or repositories (double-anonymous review). ## Common CoNEXT-specific failure modes | Failure | Why it hurts at CoNEXT | Fix | |---|---|---| | Simulation stands in for the real platform | Platform-realism is a core CoNEXT expectation | Add a testbed/deployment run, or scope the claim | | Claim outruns the measurement | The two-round review catches it | Pair each claim with evidence, or soften the claim | | Limitations deferred to one closing paragraph | Misses the chance to pre-empt objections | Argue the central threat where the result lives | | Model/leaderboard framing | Reads as an ML paper wearing a networking title | Reframe around the networking lesson (topic-selection) | | Over-signposted roadmap | Substitutes structure for argument | One-line roadmap; let the contributions carry it | ## Output format ```text [First-page arc] problem -> inadequacy -> contribution -> real-target evidence -> what changes + limitations [Claim-evidence pairs] measurement + platform + baseline> [Limitations posture] [Budget] pages used (body/appendix), acmart compliant? refs unlimited [Anonymity] third-person self-reference; no testbed/operator/repo names ```