--- name: iccv-writing-style description: Use when drafting or revising the prose and figures of an ICCV paper, covering writing for an international generalist reviewer pool, the inclusive 8-page economy, mechanism-first exposition, calibrated claims that survive a one-page rebuttal cycle, and captions and figures that carry the paper for readers who skim first. --- # ICCV Writing Style An ICCV submission is read by reviewers drawn from the most international pool in computer vision — in 2025, every author of 11,239 submissions was also a potential reviewer — and most of them work outside your subfield. The style target is therefore precise: a paper a *generalist vision researcher* can evaluate fairly in one sitting, in their second or third language, under deadline pressure of their own. ## Write for the generalist, cite for the specialist The three reviewers you draw will rarely all be specialists in your niche. Concretely: - Define subfield jargon at first use, in one clause, even terms your lab considers standard ("the chamfer-L1 metric, i.e. average nearest-neighbor distance in both directions"). - Make the method's *mechanism* explainable to an adjacent-area reviewer: what information flows where, and what would break without it. Specialists verify details; generalists score the story — you need both. - Prefer short declarative sentences. Non-native readers (and tired native ones) lose subordinate-clause chains; ICCV's reviewer pool is global by construction, and prose that filters readers filters scores. ## The inclusive-8-pages economy The cap is eight pages including figures and tables, references-only overflow (2025 rule). Treat layout as a market where every element bids for space with the evidence it delivers: | Element | Earns its space when | Evict when | |---|---|---| | Page-1 overview figure | A stranger states the idea after 30 seconds with it | It needs the body text to decode | | Pipeline figure | It replaces ≥ its own height in method prose | It restates the obvious encoder→decoder | | Main results table | Rows = strongest current baselines, matched | Padded with weak ancient rows for bulk | | Qualitative strip | Shows the *mechanism's* visible signature | Generic pretty outputs any method makes | | Ablation table | Each row flips one switch (`iccv-experiments`) | Grid dumped without a takeaway sentence | | Equation block | Notation reused ≥ twice downstream | Formalizing what one sentence says | Every caption must be self-sufficient — dataset, setting, and the takeaway in words — because the skim pass reads only captions, and at most venues in this family the skim pass happens before the real one. ## Mechanism-first sentences The genre's strongest habit: name the mechanism, then the consequence, then the number. Compare the two registers: ```text weak: "We propose a novel and effective framework that significantly outperforms state-of-the-art methods on several benchmarks." strong: "Replacing per-frame matching with a persistent memory of object queries removes the re-detection bottleneck: +3.1 HOTA on DanceTrack at identical backbone and training budget." ``` The weak sentence contains zero checkable content — and at ICCV, unfalsifiable praise adjectives ("novel", "significantly", "state-of-the-art" unscoped) are read as inexperience markers. The strong sentence makes three commitments a reviewer can verify, which is exactly what earns scores. ## Claims sized for a one-page defense Every claim in the abstract will potentially need defending in May inside a shared, single rebuttal page (`iccv-author-response`). Size claims accordingly at writing time: - Scope superlatives to dataset + protocol + budget class, in the sentence itself, not a footnote. - If generalization is claimed, the paper must contain the cross-domain table that backs it; otherwise claim the domains you tested. - Put the limitation you know about into the limitations paragraph *before* reviewers find it — a self-reported failure costs a sentence; a discovered one costs a score point and rebuttal real estate. - Never let the intro promise what the conclusion doesn't deliver: read the contributions bullets against the conclusion as a final pass; they should be the same statements at two altitudes. ## Structure that survives skim-order reading Reviewers at volume venues read out of order: abstract → figures → tables → conclusion → (maybe) everything else. Two consequences. First, the paper's argument must be reconstructible from abstract + captions + table headers alone — test this literally by extracting them: ```bash # Skim-pass simulator: what a reviewer sees in the first five minutes pdftotext -layout paper.pdf - | grep -A2 -E '^(Figure|Table) [0-9]+[.:]' > skim.txt head -60 skim.txt # does this sequence state problem → idea → evidence? ``` Second, transitions between sections carry less weight than section *openings*: begin each section with its conclusion ("Our decoder attends over a persistent memory; this section details the write and read operations"), not with throat- clearing history. ## Introduction in five moves The ICCV intro that works is a proof sketch, not a literature tour: (1) the visual capability at stake, one paragraph, concrete; (2) why current approaches miss it — mechanism of failure, not adjectives; (3) the idea, stated so a generalist could re-derive the design; (4) evidence preview with scoped numbers; (5) contributions as claims (each one falsifiable), not as an activity log ("we conduct extensive experiments" is an activity, not a contribution). ## Language-level pass, last Only after structure settles: strip hedge stacks ("could potentially help to"), convert passive method descriptions to active ("the features are fused" → "the decoder fuses"), unify tense (present for the method, past for experiments run), and hunt duplicated notation — vision papers accumulate three symbols for the same feature map by section 4. If any drafting was machine-assisted, verify every citation exists and every number matches your tables; author responsibility for the text is absolute, and fabricated references are review-killing at every CVF venue. ## Reverify each cycle - Page cap and reference-overflow wording in the 2027 author kit. - Any new required sections (limitations, ethics, disclosure statements — none verified for 2025, 待核实 for 2027). - Template version pinned to the current cycle's official kit. ## Output format ```text [Generalist test] adjacent-area reader states the idea after p.1: yes/no [Space market] elements not earning their area: [Caption audit] self-sufficient: n/m [Claim sizing] unscoped superlatives: [Skim pass] abstract+captions+headers carry the argument: yes/no [Edit queue] ```