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name: revacc-writing-style
description: Use when the prose is the bottleneck for a Review of Accounting Studies (RAST) manuscript — front-loading the contribution, writing an abstract and introduction that land, and adopting the accounting house voice. Polishes the manuscript; it does not sharpen the contribution claim (revacc-contribution-framing) or build exhibits (revacc-tables-figures).
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# Writing Style (revacc-writing-style)

## When to trigger

- The introduction buries the result under setup and literature
- The abstract describes the topic but not the finding or its implication
- The prose is passive, jargon-heavy, or reads like a finance paper that forgot the accounting
- An analytical paper drowns the intuition in notation before the reader sees the payoff
- You are doing the final pass and the manuscript voice does not match RAST's

## Write the contribution first, everywhere

RAST's first-round-decision culture rewards a manuscript whose contribution is unmissable on page one. The intro should reach the **result and its accounting implication within the first page** — not after three pages of institutional background. Use the canonical accounting-paper intro arc, compressed:

1. **The accounting question** in one or two sentences, with why it matters for reporting/markets.
2. **What you do** — the setting, design or model, in one paragraph.
3. **What you find** — the headline result with its economic magnitude (or the proposition with its accounting reading).
4. **Why it is credible** — the identification or the modeling move, briefly.
5. **The contribution** — what the field learns and the conversation it joins (one paragraph, not a list).

## The abstract has to do real work

Within the journal's limit (~150–250 words, 待核实; 检索于 2026-06), the abstract must state the question, the design/data or the model, the **finding with direction**, and the implication. Cut "this paper examines"; lead with what is true. A topic-only abstract that withholds the result reads as thin to a journal that often decides in one round.

## The accounting house voice

- **Active and direct:** "We find that mandatory disclosure reduces…" not "It is found that…".
- **Construct discipline:** define the accounting construct on first use and use it consistently; do not let "disclosure quality" drift between proxies mid-paper.
- **Mechanism in the verbs:** "tightens monitoring," "relaxes the covenant," "disciplines investment" — the channel should live in the prose, not only the hypotheses.
- **Institutional precision without overload:** give exactly the reporting/regulatory detail the result needs; relegate the rest.
- **For analytical papers:** intuition before algebra. State the result in words, then formalize; keep proofs in the appendix.

## Sequence and scope

Polish prose **last**, after identification/model, exhibits, and contribution are settled — rewriting the intro around a result you may still rebuild wastes effort. On a near-final pass: read the intro aloud, ensure each results paragraph maps to a numbered exhibit, and confirm the abstract and intro tell the *same* story as the conclusion.

## Checklist

- [ ] The result and its accounting implication appear on the first page of the intro
- [ ] The abstract states question, design/model, finding-with-direction, and implication within the limit
- [ ] Prose is active; "this paper examines" and empty hedges are cut
- [ ] The focal accounting construct is defined once and used consistently
- [ ] The channel/mechanism lives in the verbs, not just the hypothesis list
- [ ] Analytical sections give intuition before notation; proofs are in the appendix
- [ ] Abstract, intro, and conclusion tell one consistent story

## Anti-patterns

- **Buried lede:** the finding arrives on page four after exhaustive background.
- **Topic-only abstract:** describes the area, withholds the result.
- **Passive-voice fog:** "it is documented that…" draining agency from the claim.
- **Construct drift:** the key term silently changes meaning across sections.
- **Notation wall:** an analytical paper that formalizes before the reader sees the point.
- **Finance-in-disguise prose:** the accounting payoff never surfaces in the writing.

## Output format

```text
【Intro arc】question → what we do → finding → credibility → contribution (all on p.1?)
【Abstract】question + design/model + finding-with-direction + implication; within limit (待核实)
【Voice】active? construct defined once? channel in the verbs?
【Analytical】intuition-before-notation? proofs in appendix?
【Consistency】abstract = intro = conclusion story
【Next skill】revacc-submission
```