--- name: amr-rebuttal description: Use when writing the response document for an Academy of Management Review (AMR) Revise & Resubmit — structuring point-by-point replies that show the theory was genuinely strengthened, not just defended. Drafts the response; revise the manuscript's theory FIRST (amr-theory-development / amr-data-analysis) before writing the letter. --- # R&R Response Document (amr-rebuttal) ## When to trigger - You have an AMR R&R (Major Revision) or a Reject & Resubmit you intend to pursue - The theory has been revised and you now need the response-to-reviewers document - You must adjudicate conflicting reviewer requests in writing > Revise the *theory* before you write the letter. A rebuttal that argues without changing > the manuscript fails at AMR. Run `amr-data-analysis` and `amr-theory-development` first. ## Structure of the response 1. **Opening to the editor.** Thank the team; summarize the *theoretical* changes at a high level (new construct definitions, sharpened mechanism, added boundary conditions, clearer contribution). One short paragraph — substance, not flattery. 2. **Roadmap of major changes.** A short list of the biggest theory moves you made, so the editor sees the revision's shape before the point-by-point. 3. **Point-by-point responses.** For every reviewer comment, in order: - Restate the comment (verbatim or faithfully paraphrased). - State what you changed in the theory. - Quote or cite the revised manuscript location (section/proposition/page). - If you disagree, argue it on theoretical grounds — respectfully and with reasoning. 4. **Handling reviewer conflicts.** When reviewers disagree, say so, explain your adjudication, and tie it to the editor's stated priorities. ## How to respond well at AMR - **Show, don't assert.** "We strengthened the argument" is empty; point to the revised premise, the new mechanism, the added boundary condition. - **Respond to theory comments with theory.** The reviewers are theorists; a substance comment needs a substantive theoretical answer, not a wording tweak. - **Never offer data.** If a reviewer asks for "evidence," reframe within AMR's mission: strengthen the *logical* support, the mechanism, the boundary conditions, or the disconfirming-case treatment — not an empirical test. - **Concede what is right.** If a reviewer found a genuine logical gap, fix it and say so plainly. Graceful concession builds credibility for the points you do contest. - **Defend the contribution explicitly** if novelty was questioned — restate the before → after and the differentiation from the nearest prior theory, framed against Whetten's What/How/Why/Who-Where-When (AMR 1989, DOI 10.5465/amr.1989.4308371). - **Sharpen constructs** if distinctiveness was challenged — redefine with scope conditions per Suddaby's construct-clarity criteria (AMR 2010, DOI 10.5465/amr.2010.0419). - **Keep the tone collegial.** AMR review is developmental and typically runs **multiple rounds**, with the bar rising each round; the response should read as a conversation among theorists. (At AMR's empirical sibling AMJ, "we ran additional analyses and the result is robust" is a strong move; at AMR the equivalent strength comes from a tighter, more complete *argument*.) ## Per-comment template ``` Comment R[n].[k]: [restated comment] Response: [what changed in the theory + why] Location: [Section X / Proposition Pn / p. Y] [If contesting] Respectfully, we retain [X] because [theoretical reasoning]. ``` ## Checklist - [ ] The manuscript's theory was actually revised before the letter was written - [ ] Every comment from every reviewer (and the editor) has a numbered response - [ ] Each response points to a concrete manuscript location - [ ] Theory-substance comments answered with theory, not wording - [ ] No response promises or adds empirical data - [ ] Reviewer conflicts adjudicated transparently and tied to the editor's priorities - [ ] Genuine concessions made where reviewers were right - [ ] Contribution re-defended if novelty was challenged - [ ] Tone collegial and developmental throughout ## Anti-patterns - Arguing in the letter without changing the manuscript - "We thank the reviewer and have addressed this" with no concrete location or change - Answering a deep theoretical objection with a cosmetic edit - Promising data or "future empirical validation" as if it resolves a theory gap - Defensive or dismissive tone toward a reviewer's substantive point - Ignoring one reviewer to please another instead of adjudicating openly - Over-claiming the revision is "final" when AMR R&Rs typically run multiple rounds ## Output format ``` 【Decision being answered】R&R / Reject & Resubmit 【Theory revised first?】yes (summary of changes) / no → revise first 【Coverage】every editor+reviewer comment has a numbered response: yes/no 【Data offered?】must be: none 【Conflicts adjudicated】[...] 【Contribution re-defended】yes / n/a 【Next step】resubmit via ScholarOne → amr-review-process for the next round ```