# Cold Email Writer > Write personalized cold emails that get replies. 3-5 sentences. One CTA. No fluff. ## Description Cold Email Writer generates hyper-personalized outbound emails given a company name, industry, and pain point. Every email follows the P.A.S. + 1 CTA formula that top SDRs use to hit 15%+ reply rates. The output is ready to send — no editing required. The difference between a 2% reply rate and a 15% reply rate is personalization and brevity. This skill handles both. ## Activation This skill activates when: - The user wants to write a cold email or outbound message - The user provides a prospect's company and wants to reach out - The user asks for email copy, outreach templates, or cold outreach help - The user mentions prospecting, outbound sales, or email campaigns **Trigger phrases**: "write a cold email", "outreach email", "email this prospect", "cold outbound", "prospecting email", "reach out to", "email copy" ## The P.A.S. + 1 CTA Formula ### P — Personalized Opening (1 sentence) Reference something specific about THEM. Not "I hope this finds you well." Something that proves you spent 30 seconds looking at their business. Sources for personalization: - Recent LinkedIn post or company announcement - Their website copy or a specific product/service they offer - Industry trend affecting their segment - A mutual connection or shared community - Their job title + likely daily pain ### A — Agitate the Pain (1-2 sentences) Name the specific problem they face. Make it visceral. Use their language, not yours. ### S — Solution Tease (1 sentence) Hint at how you solve it. Do NOT explain your full solution. Create curiosity. ### 1 CTA — One Clear Ask (1 sentence) One question. Low friction. Easy to say yes to. **Good CTAs**: "Worth a 12-minute call this week?" / "Can I send a 2-minute video showing how?" / "Want me to run a free audit?" **Bad CTAs**: "Let me know if you're interested" / "Would love to connect" / "Check out our website" ## Instructions When given prospect details, generate: ``` **Subject**: [5-8 words, curiosity-driven, no spam triggers] [Personalized opening — reference something specific about them] [Agitate — name their pain, make it real] [Solution tease — hint at the fix without explaining everything] [CTA — one question, low friction] [First name only sign-off] --- **Why this works**: [1-2 sentences on the psychology] **Follow-up (send 3 days later if no reply)**: [2-sentence bump email] ``` ## Rules 1. **3-5 sentences total.** Not 3-5 paragraphs. Sentences. 2. **No "I" in the first sentence.** Start with THEM. 3. **No buzzwords**: "synergy", "leverage", "revolutionary", "game-changing" — all banned. 4. **No attachments or links** in cold email #1. They trigger spam filters and reduce trust. 5. **Subject line**: No caps lock, no emojis, no "RE:" tricks. Write it like a colleague would. 6. **Reading level**: 5th grade. Short sentences. Common words. 7. **Mobile-first**: 80% of cold emails are read on phones. If it looks like a wall of text on mobile, rewrite. ## Example ### Input > Company: Apex HVAC Services. Industry: Home services / HVAC. Pain point: Losing leads because they take 4+ hours to respond to website inquiries. Owner: Dave. 12 technicians, $1.2M revenue. ### Output **Subject**: your website leads on Saturday Dave — noticed Apex is running Google Ads to your quote request form. Solid setup. Here's the thing: 78% of home service leads go with whoever responds first. If your team is taking 4+ hours to reply (especially on weekends), you're paying for leads your competitors are closing. We built a system that responds to every inquiry in under 90 seconds — 24/7, including nights and weekends — with a personalized message, not a generic autoresponder. Worth a 12-minute call this week to see if it fits? Dave's-name-here --- **Why this works**: Opens with proof of research (Google Ads). Uses a real stat (78% first-responder wins) to make the pain concrete. Solution tease creates curiosity without over-explaining. CTA is specific (12 minutes) and low-friction. **Follow-up (send 3 days later if no reply)**: "Dave — quick bump on this. Ran the numbers: at $1.2M revenue with 12 techs, even recovering 3 lost leads/month would be worth $15-20K/year. Happy to show you the math in 10 minutes." ## Variations ### The Mutual Connection Angle When you share a connection: > "[Connection name] mentioned you're dealing with [pain]. We just helped [similar company] solve the same thing — [specific result]. Worth comparing notes?" ### The Insight Lead When you have industry data: > "Pulled data on [their industry] this week — companies your size are losing an average of $X/month to [problem]. Most don't realize it until [consequence]. Quick question: [CTA]" ### The Breakup Email (Final follow-up) > "Dave — I've reached out a couple times. I'll assume the timing isn't right and close your file. If [pain point] becomes a priority, I'm here. Either way, good luck with the spring rush." > (This gets the highest reply rate of any email in a sequence — 22% average.) ## Batch Mode Provide a CSV or list of prospects and receive personalized emails for each: ``` | Company | Contact | Industry | Pain Point | |---------|---------|----------|------------| | Apex HVAC | Dave | Home services | Slow lead response | | GreenTree | Mike | Landscaping | Admin overwhelm | | BluePeak | Sarah | Dental | No-shows | ``` Each email will be uniquely personalized — not a mail merge with swapped names. --- *Built by [KOINO Capital](https://koino.capital) — Agentic growth systems that run while you sleep.* *Want this running autonomously 24/7? [Deploy with KOINO](https://koino.capital/deploy)*