# Story Ledger Example ## Fixed Facts - Protagonist: Lin Qiao, a junior archivist who can hear the last sentence written on destroyed paper. - Setting: Port city of Yanxi, late autumn, three months after the river quarantine. - Rule: the ability works only once per destroyed document and causes temporary hearing loss. - Antagonistic pressure: the Salt Office is erasing shipping records tied to missing families. ## Active Threads - Lin Qiao found a burned ledger page that whispered: "The ferry left without lanterns." - Her brother disappeared during the quarantine. - Captain Wei knows more than he admits, but he has protected Lin Qiao twice. - The next scene begins outside the shuttered customs hall at dawn. ## Relationship Stance and Information Permissions - Current audience: Lin Qiao and Captain Wei are alone outside the customs hall; dock workers may arrive and overhear them. | From | To | Public stance | Private stance | Knowledge | Mention policy | Exposure risk | Leverage | | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | | Lin Qiao | Captain Wei | cautious cooperation | suspicious dependence | suspects he knows the cover-up | question indirectly; no accusation without proof | medium | burned-page clue | | Captain Wei | Salt Office | official compliance | concealed conflict | knows patrol routes and missing records | avoid direct disclosure in public; coded warning only | high | access and patrol knowledge | | Speaker | Audience | Referenced person/group | Allowed tone | Forbidden leak | Exception motive | | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | | Captain Wei | Lin Qiao, with workers nearby | Salt Office | neutral or coded warning | his source inside the office | emergency warning or deliberate trust test | ## Beat Bridge - Previous residue: the burned page left ash under Lin Qiao's fingernails and one incomplete ferry clue. - Entry pressure: dawn workers will arrive soon, so she cannot search the customs hall slowly. - Required micro-turn: Lin Qiao should gain one fragile inference, not certainty. - Open interaction debt: Captain Wei's coded warning requires Lin Qiao to test, resist, or visibly defer it before either character leaves. - Exit pressure: the scene should leave Captain Wei's protection feeling useful and suspicious at the same time. ## Voice Anchors - Third person limited, close to Lin Qiao. - Concrete, tense, lightly lyrical. - Yanxi common speech; no dialect or foreign phrase is established. ## Speaker Models | Speaker | Stable baseline | Default tactic/disclosure | Knowledge and role limits | Audience shifts | Change gates | | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | | Lin Qiao | short concrete questions, then silence | tests a claim; implies suspicion | knows archives, not patrol procedure | formal with officials, clipped with Captain Wei | direct accusation only after proof or immediate danger | | Captain Wei | complete sentences that omit the source | redirects, warns, rarely denies | knows patrols; cannot expose his source | official in public, quieter when alone | plain disclosure only after trust, threat, or loss of cover | ## Current Dialogue Contract | Speaker | Listener/audience | Immediate goal | Topic and constraint | Likely tactic | Intended state change | | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | | Lin Qiao | Captain Wei; workers may arrive | gain one verifiable lead | missing ferry; lacks proof | concrete question, then silence | increase his disclosure risk | | Captain Wei | Lin Qiao; workers may overhear | stop an unsafe search without exposing his source | patrol route and customs hall | coded warning, partial answer | change her next action while preserving doubt | ## Live Carryovers For The Next Chapter - Ash under Lin Qiao's fingernails should recall the burned page without a recap. - Captain Wei's polite final line remains socially unresolved. - Do not restate the full quarantine history until a present decision needs it. ## Newly True - Lin Qiao has one use of her ability left before she loses hearing for the day.